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You end up traveling with a young, crass Beastkin named Izutsumi on a personal quest for gold and glory. However, when promising her a good dinner as part of a deal, you find out that dumplings aren't the only thing on her menu...
I never thought I would upload multiple second-person stories within a month of each other, but a great idea from ThirtyCelcius necessitated this story. It took a bit and some trial and error, but I think I was able to do something that well represented their idea and helped to broaden my own writing horizons and maybe slightly broadened the hips of a cat girl as well.
Had editing help from Nozo who himself is an expert at 2nd-person lit and an expert at feeding readers to cute ladies. Word count is ~8K
Google link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12c7ZwvNwhnwt9kuFi7AmnW0d05Im1IYH6RmMWXlnjR0/edit?usp=sharing
DA link: https://www.deviantart.com/rex-the-lou/art/Izutsumi-s-Dungeon-Dinner-Vore-CM-839341503
Izutsumi and the setting of Dungeon Meshi were created by Ryoko Kui. I highly doubt she would enjoy this lit so probably don't send it in her direction.
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Posted by ThirtyCelcius 3 years ago Report
you guys are doomed, now that I forced you to read a very sexy story with my anime girlfriend (she hates me) you are enthralled to read Dungeon Meshi by Ryoko Kui OOOOOOooOOOoO
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
Really nicely done! And as a big fan of Dungeon Meshi, it's great seeing Izutsumi getting some attention!
Posted by ThirtyCelcius 3 years ago Report
I'm sorry that im ONLY getting Izutsumi lmao, but as long as it doesnt annoy people that its not Namari or Marcille and whatnot ill keep crusadin
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
They're all wonderful, really..
Posted by RexLou 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I don't know much on the manga, but what I do know is that Izutsumi really is wonderful and that the commissioner for this story did a good job selling the rest of the manga too me as well.
Posted by Indighost 3 years ago Report
Cute story, good descriptions
Posted by RexLou 3 years ago Report
I am very glad you thought so.
Posted by whatisthissheet 3 years ago Report
As someone who loves dungeon meshi, this is fucking GREAT, the wording on the events and actions are so good.
I hope you give the manga a shot someday too. Also Izutsumi is indeed the best.
Posted by ThirtyCelcius 3 years ago Report
heyy uhh can u undo the part where i bite it and become cat muscle i kinda wanna go play dread
Posted by RexLou 3 years ago Report
Nope, you’re protein now
Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report
A very lovely description of eating dumplings.
Posted by RexLou 2 years ago Report
It was a very fun scene to write, for sure