Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report

Oh how creative. I love the turnabout and the descriptions here~

Posted by Canace 3 years ago Report

Oh, thank you! This is my first vore story and I was worried I may've gone overboard in some aspects.

Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report

I recommend giving the other lady a name to help the audience keep track of the story. Other than that a really strong Idea~

Posted by Canace 3 years ago Report

Haha, I meant to but forgot to include that part and just kept writing.

Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report

For sure keep that motivation. Remember that you can make tons of drafts

Posted by Vitcent 3 years ago Report

Gosh its exciting to see your style of girls in writing! <3 A cocky succubus getting the tables turned on her by a beastie is very fun...
I'm excited to see more writing submissions now :3c

Posted by Canace 3 years ago Report

Thank you! I appreciate the support.

I was a bit nervous transitioning back to writing from role player and was unsure if writing a story about my type of succubus without any prior introduction would hurt the story.

Posted by Vitcent 3 years ago Report

Ahha I think it played out well! The trope of pred and prey are already pretty well established for vore stuff so I think people can pick up on that pretty easily.
(And gosh if you ever need another victim for your stories, I'm always cute and clueless... >w>)

Posted by boboisdead 3 years ago Report

good surprise, I like the turn around

Posted by Canace 3 years ago Report

Thank you! I wanted to experiment with turn arounds.