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A bit of a short story I wrote at 3am last night. Sometimes preds get what's coming for 'em, they can't always win after all. Gross stuff is always good. Especially when combined with vore. Yeah, that's the good shit.
Hopefully I've gotten a bit better at writing since last post, I've done a few requests for friends that I've not posted, so maybe it's helped me.
If ya like this sorta stuff, let me know. Plus, if you wanna comment other things that are similar, maybe I'll end up doing them. Maybe not. Who knows! I certainly don't.
1,947 words long.
I don't know why it posted like 4 times, sorry about that. I'm still new :)
Thumbnail art is NOT mine in any way. You can find the artist here: https://twitter.com/softerservice
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Posted by Randomdude5 3 years ago Report
I am kinda interested in what caused, Anna's stomach to be upset. I assume that it was a premise in the story that Anna would be sick, so what caused her to be sick might not have been thought out. I kinda wonder if it is something like the norovirus, or bacteria, causing food poisoning. It could be something in the prey's pockets that took had chemicals in it. It is kinda fun to speculate on what caused it.
Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report
I had an idea that I based her symptoms off of, but if it’s more fun to think about it then I’ll leave it as is :3
Posted by CrimsonDragonKing 3 years ago Report
Nice work OwO
Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report
Thanks Draco :D
Posted by Raesetsu 3 years ago Report
I loved this one. Anything to do with regurgitation is top notch, specially if the prey is already in pieces. She's just relieving the pressure. Too bad her meal went to waste :(
Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report
I’ve not seen too much vomit stuff with vore, and I was just dying to write some of my own, so I’m glad ya enjoyed it too :D
Unfortunately she lost her meal, but oh well, what can ya do.
Posted by Raesetsu 3 years ago Report
Glad you like writing the gross stuff. Graphic digestion, detailing the bones and meat in the digestive system...it's beautiful. You've become one of my favorite writers with your stories. Not a lot of people go into it, so glad I got you to read :D
Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report
Hey thanks! I really am a fan of the disgusting stuff. It's just so fun and interesting to get into everything with the hard details, and it's not as common as I would have thought (even if I don't read that much anymore).
Glad you've liked what I got so far, there'll definitely be more in the future :D
Posted by ZRex030 3 years ago Report
WOW this is really great, love the gross details, the sweat and nausea, and especially the waste of life~
Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report
Thanks you :3
I'm happy people liked the result of my fetish ventures !
Posted by shlurpay64 2 years ago Report
Sounds like Anna's prey was on the tubby side, even before getting puked into a tub, too bad she didn't make it to her ass but it's better to try to eat a delicious woman than just let her go~
Posted by Shanzhai9 2 years ago Report
I thought it was great. It felt like the author had experienced it
Posted by sevensix 2 years ago Report
Out of curiosity, why the switch from document to PDF format?