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Tags: Asphyxiation Belly bulge belly play belly press boob play Child Prey Fatal Female Prey Food in stomach Food play Implied reformation M/F Macro/Micro Male Pred massage Masturbation navel licking object swallowing oppai loli orphan Size difference tasting teacher teasing Underage prey written work
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction and fantasy and is in no way of a reflection of how i feel about the things i have written. This was purely for entertainment and in no way should be done in the real world thank you ^^
Description: A 5 grade male teacher enjoys a wonderful and much needed break at a little unusual Cafe and a cute 12 year old girl
now that that is out of the way I really do hope you enjoy this one. Its taken me a long time ..i think 4 weeks to do. and over all i love how it turned out.With two stories having unwilling prey i thought a nice fall cuddle and intimate story would be a good change of pace.. who knows i might make this a mini series :D
Comments are always welcome and let me know what you all think and what i should change or what you want next thank you and Happy thanksgiving or what ever fall holiday you celebrate :D
Edit: i'm sorry i still can't get this spacing right ;=; but i hope you guys can read it a bit better ^^;
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Posted by BloodPuma 3 years ago Report
Overall it as a good and sexy story!! I'd have preferred it if there was a scene with the girls in the belly masturbating or making out, but it's still good. But you did surprise me (in a good way) with the Macro/Micro tag. Normally I don't go for Micro Prey, but having them turn back to normal size was a very nice touch!! And the "romantic" parts with Alice and the teacher were just prefect, not to racy not to clean. Just the right amount of NSFW!
Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
omg thank you^^ its such a treat to have a first comment so thank you for that. and second of all i'm glad you liked it :D i didn't feel good about sharing that kinda thing to he public. i feel that that is my one little tease to myself and but i'm glad iwas able to still make it a bit naughty for the holidays heheh . think this should be a stand alone or you want more?
i can't promise it will be racy but i can try to please
Posted by BloodPuma 3 years ago Report
I could see a sequel in it, and maybe a spinoff, but not a series. But that just this writer's opinion.
And don't worry so much about what others think of your writing, this is a place to write what you love (about vore). So, if you want to make it super sexy and/or curl you should write it that way! I know a lot of my Loli stories don't get a lot of comments, but I write them so they can exist. That is the point of writing!
Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
okay i'll think aoubt ^^ what was your fav part?:)and huh i didn't think of it that way. i guess it is all about the story. long as people like it and all ^^
Posted by BloodPuma 3 years ago Report
I'd have to say my favorite part was with the micro girls being played with a bit while they were eaten. And how they returning to normal size in his belly!
Posted by plaguetyranno 3 years ago Report
Do you write non-lewd things? Your writing style is wonderful. The way you describe everything with such warm cozy imagery really gives a good impression, it makes you miss going to places that you’ve never been to, places that don’t even exist. And your characters are full of life and personality, you think of really weird things to say like, that thing about a cow chewing it’s own cud, but it feels SO believable!!
Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
I did on Deviant art.This is my first site during lewd and i'm honestly still not sure how to feel about writing this kinda thing to the public^^; and thank you so uch this really means a lot to me^^ well i firugre might as well make it as conuty as possible :D
this really means alot to me tho so i'm glad you liked it :D
Posted by Rhysion 3 years ago Report
And here I figured it would have been Alice being eaten as she was the first girl introduced, but I suppose including more characters for that works too. A fun little story though. There's a bit of background to the things going on, a bit of hungry fun, and a bit of naughtiness. The touching and playing with each of the girls was nice.
I think your spacing issue is a text alignment one. You may have clicked on the Center Text option in the program you used, and need to click Left Align to bring it all to the left like normal.
Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
i thought about that. but there aren't alot of admirers on this site so i thought why not make it this way instead?? and i think this turned out good^^
and thank you i'm glad you enjoyed it. still not use to making this to lewd but i'm finding out you don't have to make stories too lewd or lewd at all for a good story
okay i'll try that. I use google docs tho but that might help ^^
Also i didn't forget our Rp its just been a busy week and i haven't had the energy to reply ;=;
Posted by Rhysion 3 years ago Report
Google Docs has the text alignment button too. It's towards the right on the toolbar at the top. You can hover the mouse over the buttons until you find "Align," then select "Align Left."
More writing, reading, and experimenting with ideas will probably be the most helpful for figuring out what works for you. It can also be fun to just try out new things too!
Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
ahh okay thanks^^ next time i'll try that
thanks alot for the advice and encouragement :D
Posted by Sycamore 3 years ago Report
What a lovely, cozy, sexy little story you've created! So sweet and sultry, with a good mixture of affection and care, and hunger and lust <3
I'll admit, I'm pretty jealous of Richard; he's got such a sweet little admirer to keep by his side, now! (Bet she tastes just as sweet, too~)
Posted by Lavendercake877 3 years ago Report
thank you so much^^ feel like here aren't enough belly lovers in writings so firgured what the heck
oh trust me she's sweeter then the tarts hehehe who knows maybe Richard will get to see how sweet she'll feel going down either in he's mouth or..other places ;)