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There! It took a lot longer than intended, but the next part is DONE.
I think this is the most edited story I ever wrote. Kept think of little changes, until I was properly happy with it.
I have been writing on it since before I posted the last one, but commissions, real life stuff, etc., meant it had to be second priority time and again. Sorry if anyone was waiting for the second part. But here it is.
The next chapter is already in the works, hopefully it won’t take quite as long before that is posted ????
Anyways, we pick up right where part 1 ended. Hope you enjoy.
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Posted by Diversity23 3 years ago Report
I guess we're back to 6 girls, if I didn't miscalculate ^^
Glad to see you managed the trip club part very good, with how sensual the dances are, chill and tense the mood is, and how horny girls tend to be in this kind of place ^^'.
Speaking of horny girls, I'm wondering how the policewoman and her captive are doing ^.^…
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
I guess the number depends on how you count them :). I mostly kept the number secre so not to give away the outcome of the drinking contest.
I have actually planned what happens with Cindy and the police woman. However, squeezing it in will break the flow of the series.
I will do an epilogue series of short stories after though, where I pick up things I feel wasn't quite finished.
Cindy and the police woman will be one of them.
Anyway, thank you for the comment and the compliments :)
Posted by Diversity23 3 years ago Report
Hmm… That's clever, can't wait to see how many girls will still be alive ^^
I'm also looking forward to reading this epilogue series of yours :p
Posted by msc13 3 years ago Report
This series is definitely getting better as you write more chapters. Something about your dialogue is really exceptional and gets me hooked every time!
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Thank you. Comments like that mean a lot to me.
I really enjoy writing stories and hearing that they resonate with other people too, makes it a lot more fun :)
Posted by 2good2btru 3 years ago Report
Just finished with the other two stories, really enjoyed the casualness with how the girl treat being eaten. Also seeing Jane being reformed makes me wonder if cindy also received that kind of treatment and is hidden away in a sex dungeon, or is simply reduced to fat and is never going to be reformed.
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Glad to hear you enjoyed it :) Hope you like the next chapters too.
We will get back to Cindy, so you will find out ;) After Girls Night Out, I will do a sort of epilogue series of short stories, where I expand on some things. And the fate of Cindy will be the first.
Posted by 2good2btru 3 years ago Report
Nice, can't wait!