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this is actually the first time I have sat down and wrote something like this! It probably sucks, I'd love some feedback!
no vore! yet <:)
IT IS MENTIONED THO SO IM MARKING IT AS VORE
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Posted by rabidPsionic 2 years ago Report
For your first story like this, it's really good!
Posted by Plumpling 2 years ago Report
Aw thanks!
Posted by TootCore 2 years ago Report
For a first story, it was a fun read ! The insertion of flashbacks is a bit sudden in a few places, but otherwise you're off to a very good start.
Posted by Plumpling 2 years ago Report
Yeah, I should have probably re worked it bcs i wrote it while I was high LOL