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Makoto licked her lips after slurping up a hapless victim in the student council room. This wouldn't be the first time someone found their way in her gut after another one of her "talks". The student body was aware of her gluttony, but with the threat of them also suffering the same fate she freely makes Shujin a buffet.
Wobbling home from her big catch she stumbles right into the house. "Phew, that was tough lugging this meat in here," said Makoto. Makoto's meal was breaking down and made her stomach a huge tub of lard, but still had her belly button popped out. "You really did a number on me um er... whatever your name was," said Makoto as she rubbed her sweaty gurgling paunch. She decided to give herself a good look in the mirror and she couldn't help but look at herself with a lewd expression. " Oh God, I won't be able to hide these BooBWOUAaOoORPss from sis," Makoto excitedly exclaimed as a wet belch exited her mouth leaving her tongue hanging out her maw. Then she started to hear her undershirt start to rip and her bra coming clean off and with a big tear. Her big breasts with hard bright pink nipples were out in the open now. Makoto had an orgasm at the sight and a satisfied belch to go along with it. Raising her arms above her head in the mirror and gazing at her new sexy form, Makoto says " This situation benefits me OOOOUUUURRaaPP greatly." With one good squeeze of her tits and another raucous belch she turns into bed for the night thinking of her next catch.
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This is my first short story written me and I would like to hear any critique you guys might have in the comments. I am huge fan of pred burps myself so I wanted to try and emphasize that.

The artwork is from the amazing  ecchipandaa.

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Beefsalad

Posted by Beefsalad 2 years ago Report

I'll watch your progress with great interest for this is magical

mrminceman

Posted by mrminceman 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I really appreciate that.

bajillionandone

Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report

It's always a pleasure to see/read about burping preds!

mrminceman

Posted by mrminceman 2 years ago Report

I am glad you like it !

syncho

Posted by syncho 2 years ago Report

nice

narutowolfie12

Posted by narutowolfie12 2 years ago Report

Such an amazing idea! Concept of the the usually restrained and stern Makoto getting taste as a predator and getting utterly lost in it to the point of losing control of herself entirely.

mrminceman

Posted by mrminceman 2 years ago Report

Thats definitey the idea yep :)