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Tags: Absorption Accidental vore Anal Vore ass expansion Belching bones in cum Breast Expansion Caring pred Casual pred Casual vore Cock Vore Cruel Pred Cum Digestion cum disposal Digestion Disposal Disregard of Life external digestion F/M failed rescue Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Futa pred Futa/F Gentle Pred Gladion Graphic digestion H/F Hau Herm Pred Hilda (Pokémon) Human Pred Human Prey human/human immobilized prey lillie (pokemon) Male Prey mature female mature pred mature woman Milf milf pred misunderstanding Multiple Preds Multiple Preys multiple stomachs NPC Npc pred Nurse Joy Nurse Pred Older Pred Older woman Oral Vore Painful Digestion Paralyzed prey Pokemon Pokemon pred pokemon sun and moon Pokemon Upset Pokemon/Human Pred turned prey Primarina primarina pred Punk girl punk pred Religious Pred sadistic pred Same Size Selene (Pokémon) semi-willing pred tail expansion Uncaring Pred unique digestion unwilling observer Unwilling Prey Weight Gain Willing Pred
Summary: Nurse Joy is in charge of the health and well-being of Pokemon. A gentle and kind lady, but what would she do when she feels that a Pokemon is being threatened.
Word Count: 15,627
Disclaimer: There is a Pokemon/Human vore scene. Look at tags or at the reference image to see which Pokemon that is if that would sway your judgement.
Author’s Note: This is the fourth entry to the Pokemon Upset series written by me. Please let me know what you think of the characters and scenes detailed in this story.
Character References:
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2. Copy the link and paste it onto a new tab.
3. Don’t know what to tell you, you have to type in the character’s name and franchise in the search bar and find the image yourself.
Nurse Joy/Thumbnail reference: Pokemon YouTube Official Channel Community Tab (posted about 3 weeks ago from the posting of this story).
Lillie: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Lillie#/media/File%3AUSUM_Lillie.png
Gen 7 (Alola) Beauty: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Beauty_(Trainer_class)#/media/File%3AVSBeauty_SM.png
Primarina: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Primarina_(Pokémon)#/media/File%3A730Primarina.png
Hau: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Hau
Selene: https://hero.fandom.com/wiki/Selene_(Pokémon)?file=Sun_Moon_Protagonist_female.png
Team Plasma Female Grunt (Right): https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Team_Plasma_Grunt_(Trainer_class)#/media/File%3ABlack_White_Team_Plasma_Grunts.png
Hilda: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Hilda_(game)#/media/File%3ABlack_White_Hilda.png
Gen 7 Female Punk Trainer: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Punk_Girl_(Trainer_class)#/media/File%3ASpr_SM_Punk_Girl.png
Gladion: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Gladion#/media/File%3ASun_Moon_Gladion.png
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#/media/File%3ABlack_White_Team_Plasma_Grunts.png){kind=link}
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Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
PSA: Not sure why the hyperlink for some of the images didn’t appear correctly. You are going to have to copy and paste for some of them (or just look them up online).
Posted by 0nl1ce 2 years ago Report
Awesome job as always and you really did a nice job with the cock vore description.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Thanks. There aren’t that many stories with that type of vore being the main focus, so I’m glad that my depiction of dick dining is coming off as increasingly polished.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report
Nurse joy is so kindly cruel and honestly i love seeing her melt somebody like this~
And the side vores are great as well.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Thanks. Kind cruelty is a personality trait that has honestly been rising in the ranks for me. And that is not just because writing a character such as this minimizes the issue of cognitive dissonance that a typically kind person would experience from committing voracious acts. Yea, the hardest part of the construction of the story was deciding on which side vores to include. Thus, I ended up choosing all of Lillie’s friends (of similar ages) to be the main focus for those scenes.
In short, I really wanted to see Nurse Joy melt someone down like this too.
Posted by grz01 2 years ago Report
Absolutely incredible, loved the story thanks
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Thanks! Absolutely loved that my story was incredible for you to show your appreciation through commenting.
Don’t be shy about commenting on any of my other stories that you end up liking. Otherwise some kind nurse might mistake your reclusive mood to be an indicator of more threatening features that would make you a danger to others.
Don’t want to be guzzled down a cock and covered in cum now do we? Or do we?
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Is nebby dead.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
No
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I can see Nebby getting the truth of the prey nature out and Joy being horrified at what she done.
I do like graphic nature of things, I tend to look toward fatal vore for the roughness of it.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
While I am not the biggest fan of grim, graphic ends, such as the detail of an eye dripping out the socket, I have to say.. you're incredible as a writer! Due to rush, or something else maybe, there are some types here and there, but like, who cares? It's still a well-written piece of text, even if it has typos!
It was interesting to see things splay out, and the bits of lore, or more fittingly back story, being spread out was very interesting to see, and a nice read.. especially when there is an attempt to give cause for Hilda's disappearance!
I love how you also kinda half-turned Lillie, the innocent sweetheart who would never wish anyone harm, into a villain, at least in the eyes of Joy.. and the addition of the part about Hau and Selene (nice to have her actual name used, even if I do still prefer Moon as a name :p) was just even sweeter.
Lastly, there's the part about Gladion, which was interesting. How would you describe the thing with Nebby there? Like, why did he get stunned? And also.. nice idea for the grunt, even if I myself can be a little salty at the lack of disposal from her side.. but, that's just horny-brain x3
..and that I was hoping to see some team skull disposal stuff. :p
It was still an interesting, and uncommon, sort of finality to her, though.. not necessarily my favorite, but good none the less!
It was a bit hard to decipher when in the story people knew about Joy's jewels, and when they didn't. I would imagine that the beauty knew what was going on? What about Selene, did she know that Joy had *someone* in there? And lastly, did - supposedly - Lusamine? (the mention of someone being the mother of two gives me that impression due to the prey of the story)
Overall, your writing in general, even if not always to my own preference due to the focus on graphical contents, is phenomenal, and this was the first time in quite a bit that I didn't just see you uploaded, and moved on after looking at tags, and it was a nice read!
Oh, and nice onomatopoeia!
Also where'd the beauty go?! >:cccc
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Thanks TrainerKatrine for deciding to read this story, despite the graphic grim portrayal not being entirely to your taste, and commenting.
There would probably be less typos if I took more time editing my story, but I already spent ~2 hours proofreading it yesterday…and my schedule is packed academic wise (reason why I am responding to your comment 8 hours later) until the end of this week. Thus, I decided that it would be better to release it now instead of spending more hours proofreading it a week later (have an exam to prepare for).
Thanks. I’m glad that you liked the duality of perspective that I decided to take with Lillie, and that you appreciated the Selene and Hau scene.
Nebby has the potential to become a Pokemon that is able to open up wormholes. Something that far exceeds the capabilities of most Psychic types. Thus, it warping space, while in a panic state, to an extent that it created an electrical discharge from erratic movement of atoms left from the empty space it inhabited doesn’t sound too far-fetched to me. Especially since electricity is just certain types of charged particles moving in a certain motion. I went with Nebby, than a more easily explained Electric type that could cause Gladion paralysis (via Thunderwave) because he is supposed to be an extremely proficient trainer. Gladion would have been able to avoid such an attack from a Pokemon that he knew could possibly due that. Nebby was both a Pokemon that he wouldn’t expect and a subject of interest for him to approach.
Yea, I was worried that some people would be dissatisfied from the lack of traditional excrement disposal in the story. Even though I include a disposal warning in most of my stories, I still think that some people just see the scat tag and just skip the story. Thus, I decided not to include a scat disposal as I still had the disposal scene with Lillie melting the punk trainer. It was also fitting thematically that the brother and sister were able to reunite, albeit posthumously.
Nurse Joy moves behind the counter to conceal her exposed bagged balls, in a bid to preserve professionalism. But as shown by the beauty and the mother of two (wink I’ll leave it up to the readers to interpret that however they wish) it is a casual sight to see. Nurse Joy’s main anxiety was being discovered that she had consumed an individual related to a family of high social status and influence. Worries that we’re assuaged in the first encounter with the beauty (as that was the narrative purpose of her being in the story). Anyone who got close to the counter ended up seeing Joy’s sizable scrotum. Even Selene. She saw the jostling of Joy’s scrotum (Lillie’s final attempt to get noticed) but it was only a light swaying to her.
Once again, thanks a lot for the comments as they not only pointed out which parts of the story were interesting, but portions that I could still improve on.
As for the Beauty, I already explained her narrative purpose in the story, but you are probably wondering why she wasn’t mentioned in the end after the suggestive statement she made to Nurse Joy. Simply, Joy is an experienced predator with a lot on her plate in life. She knows how such an encounter with a lascivious woman like “Beauty” would go. Most likely with one of them being consumed. Joy might have entertained such prospects when she was younger, but something more stable would be more amenable in this point of her life.
Although, if you don’t mind going out with “Beauty” and chancing a One Night Swallow then be my guest.