Somewhere in Germany a Company much in profit has begun and propagated. A company being named Pred Labs, a company being half as rich as Disney due to its upbringing of vore which was wished by many and even published the media. It was also in itself a gold rush for Anyone Who ever wanted to work a job related to the kink itself while getting close to the real thing and getting paid all the same. It was also well praised by the Staff for not just being one of the most fun places to work in but also extremely chill and friendly Higher ups, almost like a complete and utter corporate Heaven or was it? Well there is an exception to every rule, an example being a case with Vanessa Who started with a simple job but was always a complete punching bag for the Higher ups.
Vanessa was one these People Who wanted to get a job there however She was rather shy and not well treated by the Alpha Preds. She prepared stuff for these same Preds such as shrinking technology, reformer gadgets, a cup of joe when needed, even some snacks, but unfortunately these complete Bullies were ungrateful enough to bully Vanessa all the same. Infamously, James Smith out of the rest would be most known for picking on Vanessa and making Her life miserable. One day though, Vanessa has come on the Job today in hopes this day would be better. But so again She came into the job to get a shrinking gadget for James, however when He mocked Her, She had not allowed the Jerkwad to jerk Her for much longer.
Vanessa spoke out against Him and She made it certain that there was no more of His shit to speak of which She said. “So I always fetch things for You and prepared and You’re still going to be a shithead? Let’s see how You like being treated like shit.” Which in all cause made Her utilize the shrinking gadget on James and then picked the Man up. James even said “HEY! TURN ME BACK!”
But unfortunately Jame’s fate was already designated and imminent as Vanessa ignored His demands for being turned back. She hung James by the arm roughly as He wiggled in pain but this didn’t stop here, as You see Vanessa has dropped James into Her maw as She then closed it teasingly. James was stuck against the roof of Her mouth against His will as Her tongue tortured Him for quite some time, and finally after sometime She has stopped lollygagging and finally swallowed the Man-bitch down. James tried to struggle and climb His way out but pathetically failed every single time He even attempted, only getting overpowered by every swallow She does. And finally after a while James has been swallowed down and is now fighting against Her stomach to no end however all while enjoying Her Prey’s absolutely failed attempts, She has very much realized something awful.
She needed to hide what She was doing before She had the possibility of getting fired, or even worse might even get swallowed if She was ever found out once. So She tried to hide the imprints of James with Her hand cupped over Her stomach as She walked out the place where She was getting the shrinker for James originally but mid-way bumped into the Owner of the facility albeit quite recognizable and famous; Dr. Sunny. She even landed on the ground before She was helped up by Sunny Who imminently saw James though She has not realized this time and just said to Him “I apologize Sir, I didn’t mean to bump into You but thank You very much.”
But when Sunny did recognize James there, He seemed disappointed at first but would ask Her what was going on beforehand. “Vanessa, can You please tell Me what was going on? And especially because I can recognize James directly in there and I want You to explain everything that just happened.” Vanessa even though She did not think She was in a good situation still told Sunny the truth all the same as lying about the situation was not even slightly worth it either as lying would make it worse, so why not just tell the truth for a good reason. “As You see CEO Sunny, James was picking on Me as usual. So I shrunk and ate Him.”
Oddly enough Sunny actually let it go and thought not much of it either, albeit only if Vanessa took the new job of a professional Pred for movies and musical performances of the company. The reasoning was all from being impressed and due to how rich it could make Her, She wouldn’t even hesitate to go upon contract and in fact it was an improvement to Her work experience. As She was continuing to churn up James, She was now never bullied or mistreated by any Alpha Pred ever again because They know for sure not to fuck with Her in the slightest. James has been the entire time begging Vanessa to let Him go and even been thrashing around albeit to His Own death never to be seen again, and as such this experience made Vanessa more and more dominant until She became the star of pred labs and albeit a very strongly represented and respected figure within the company hard to know nothing about except for Ones Who were not into vore or would not keep up with the company. In which caught the eyes of an Arch-God named “4” Poet or sometimes known as Mx. Poet for Ones Who deeply respected Them Who normally was only into same size vore, however They were extremely interested in Vanessa’s new practically alpha dog stance in the company only second to Sunny or the Ones higher than Her.
And so one day, Vanessa agreed to meet Mx. Poet as Sunny highly permitted and in fact encouraged entirely. Mx. Poet sat at the same table as Vanessa in a vore buffet as Their special interview was recorded as Mx. Poet cleared Their throat and said. “So… Miss Vanessa… How do You do here?” Vanessa commented “I’m doing good, how about You?” Mx. Poet breathed in and out a little bit though not heavily “I’m doing okay though every day is a shitty day as usual. So anyways I have a bit of a Question.” The question in itself made Vanessa raise one of Her eyebrows very slightly though not by much which She asked “Well? What might it be? I genuinely want to know.”
Mx. Poet which responded “So while You have devoured James aka pretty much lost Your vore-ginity, what was Your favorite part about devouring Him?” Vanessa just smirked as She said “My favorite part was teaching this piece of shit a lesson and teaching Him Who the hell to fuck with or Who was actually in charge.” Mx. Poet seemed pretty mind-blown however They were not even fascinated yet “So Vanessa ever since You have eaten James, has Anyone ever given You shit since?” Vanessa of course as She and Mx. Poet got up to get some tinies to eat and just shrugged as the camera man continued to record and said “I definitely can’t name a time where Anyone screwed with Me ever again and I don’t blame Them. And especially when They hear that I took James down and became quite a dominant Girl of the whole facility, some might not like Me but a lot sure do respect Me. That’s for damn sure.” Vanessa said jokingly nudging Her elbow into Mx. Poet’s arm as They chuckled a bit from the gesture from Her.
After a small bit of both of Them getting Their tinies to eat, Vanessa just gets some normal tiny Humans while Mx. Poet got multiple of an normally tiny aggressive sentient species that can expand to twice the size of a Human the two have returned to the table to eat Their food. Mx. Poet even asked another question mid-way “So Vanessa what do You think of Your new fame? Does it bother You? Does it please You? Does it throw wrenches into Your life? And what do You think of the possibility that People are probably busting Their nuts to Your performances?” Vanessa just shrugged at the question before answering while smiling all the same “I don’t mind having the tad bit of fame that I have and in fact it feels pretty cool, sure I get creepy fan letters and very rarely death threats but for the most part it’s really nothing. If People are masturbating to My performances then it’s not like I care and in fact I just like making People happy, it’s pretty much erotica anyways; there’s not much else to expect.”
The rest of the recorded interview was just Them eating and Mx. Poet asked questions as usual as Vanessa answered. And in fact the interview actually went well in the process, pred labs even being granted more fortune and general gain from Mx. Poet. Ever since then for some mysterious reason, the shapeshifting arch-god Mx. Poet was never seen anywhere in Germany ever again though rumors have gone around the country that the odd arch-god is still somewhere around the planet in the United States. Though the rumors have never been confirmed and in fact might not be confirmed until Mx. Poet comes back within Own volition, and the tale went happily ever after for Vanessa but confusingly ever after for Anyone Who wanted any interaction with Mx. Poet after.
Definition of Mx.
A title instead of Mr/Ms for People Who identify to be non-binary or don’t use binary pronouns at all. It is also pronounced “mix”
Well I won't go down the whole list since I don't have much time, but in the first paragraph for example, "a company being half as rich as Disney due to its upbringing of vore which was wished by many and even published the media."
It seems you struggle with tenses of your verbs, which isn't terrible per sé, but definitely worth looking out for. "A company half as rich as..."
There's quite a few unnecessary capital letters, mainly on pronouns like Him, Her. That's not needed, and, well, an English teacher might remove points for that.
Perhaps not a typo, but more of an ambigious or unclear sentence, "...vore which was wished by many..." as in, everyone wanted to have made the upbringing, or everyone wants vore in their life? "...and even published the media." I'll be blunt, I don't know what you mean with this xD
But like I said, have it proofread by someone, take some time between finishing and uploading your story to let it rest, and be sure it's fully rounded off, and... that's about it.
Also late happy new year! xD
Posted by 4thedegen 2 years ago Report
Who Im talking about is SunnyCGI, sorry for the inconveniences.
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Posted by 4thedegen 2 years ago Report
I'm also a new gallery user, so shrug.
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Posted by Matteo42 2 years ago Report
Aye, that's pretty solid mate! Some typos here and there sure, maybe have someone proofread it for ya, and then it'll be some good content indeed :D
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Posted by 4thedegen 2 years ago Report
Well, what kinda typos,
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Posted by Matteo42 2 years ago Report
Well I won't go down the whole list since I don't have much time, but in the first paragraph for example, "a company being half as rich as Disney due to its upbringing of vore which was wished by many and even published the media."
It seems you struggle with tenses of your verbs, which isn't terrible per sé, but definitely worth looking out for. "A company half as rich as..."
There's quite a few unnecessary capital letters, mainly on pronouns like Him, Her. That's not needed, and, well, an English teacher might remove points for that.
Perhaps not a typo, but more of an ambigious or unclear sentence, "...vore which was wished by many..." as in, everyone wanted to have made the upbringing, or everyone wants vore in their life? "...and even published the media." I'll be blunt, I don't know what you mean with this xD
But like I said, have it proofread by someone, take some time between finishing and uploading your story to let it rest, and be sure it's fully rounded off, and... that's about it.
Also late happy new year! xD
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Posted by 4thedegen 2 years ago Report
You too, I think I understand a bit more on how I'll improve my writing.
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