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Ajax and her commander spend some time together on their wedding night.
This is my first vore story so I would appreciate any feedback you can give.
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Posted by Andris 2 years ago Report
You have talent if this is your first try. Well done. A good take on intimate relationship ub.
Posted by TrWrDr 2 years ago Report
Thanks. I've done quite a bit of non vore related writing, so it's not the first story I've written, but I'm glad you like it.
Posted by Fusz 2 years ago Report
I'm not a huge fan of giant vore, but I must admit that it's a very good story, the writing was excellent and I liked Ajax's relationship with her piggy (Marcus), without a doubt a very good job!
My only complaint would be that it doesn't have the "azur lane" tag, if I didn't see the name "Ajax" I would have missed this story, but it's nothing that affects the story.
Posted by TrWrDr 2 years ago Report
Thanks for pointing that out, I didn't realize I missed that.