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Advanced Diplomacy
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Done for a secret santa. The prompt:
Pred: Dragon Lord Ember
Prey: Any pony except Twilight Sparkle
Some size difference, oral vore, unwilling prey, willing feeder
Twilight is feeding an unwilling pony to Ember, telling them something along the lines of
"If I fill her belly, Ember agreed she would tell me about dragons and help fill in the gaps of Equestrian knowledge. You want to help Equestria, don't you?"
Had fun with this one. I need to draw more maws.
Done for Mr. Left (https://derpibooru.org/profiles/Mr-dot-Left09)
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Posted by FanficFetishist 2 years ago Report
Ember's thoughts right now: "I seriously can't believe she fell for that! This is great!"
Posted by Mightyshockwave 2 years ago Report
Hey, no scales off her back if her new ally can't read sarcasm and teasing.
Posted by gimmickaccount12345 2 years ago Report
Plot twist: Equestria runs out of ponies before Ember's belly is filled.
Posted by Mightyshockwave 2 years ago Report
Well, it was worth a shot!
Posted by Nebbie 2 months ago Report
I want to express that this image has a great overall setup without using too much in the way of graphic detail, and I love how Trixie's squirming just over Ember's open mouth, like she only just now decided to protest her demise.
It's also kind of an implicit revenge for Trixie's shenanigans.
I think about the only way that part could be better was if Ember's tongue was teasing Trixie a bit, and maybe if her dialog explicitly called out her having sudden second thoughts.
The text obviously has issues as well with just how it looks, but you figured that one out in later images.
The other thing that I think pulls down the image is that Starlight and Maud's dialog is pretty low-impact (Maud's not super into it, and Starlight's not super against it) and the two don't make much sense being part of this (Maud might like to see the local rocks, but she probably wouldn't be into the feeling of vore and would just want to examine eaten rocks and dip out, and Starlight is simply too important to feed to Ember so fast).
I think the pair in the stomach would've worked better as (very against + very into) Rarity+Fluttershy (suggests betrayal of close friends who aren't important), Lightning Dust+Tree Hugger (suggests disposal of weirdos), Bon Bon+Lyra (best dialog-play, and suggests disposal of a SMILE agent who might oppose this), or Minuette/Twinkleshine/Moon Dancer+Lemon Hearts (suggests betrayal of secondary friends, possibly also Ember needs unicorns specifically). Obviously, I doubt there'll be a revision or sequel, but I think these ideas might help for any similar concepts with prey selection.
Posted by Nebbie 2 months ago Report
Oh, and as someone said on Derpi...horn rings would make sense.
Posted by Mightyshockwave 2 months ago Report
Thank you for the insightful comment. Yeah, this pic is a bit amateurish in hindsight. I definitely feel like I have a better handle on what makes a pic exciting. Also, for the prey selection, you're right, it wasn't thought out well. I picked Starlight and Maud simply because they're my favorites.
Posted by Nebbie 2 months ago Report
Ah. It's not that amateurish, I'd say, though I will note further that the sound effect noises don't make sense (she'd just be burping at this stage), and do seem like something put in due to a lack of confidence in Trixie's peril as a prime focus.
Starlight and Maud could certainly make sense if they were clones, and their memories were going to be used to teach their original counterparts about the magic of dragon digestion and how rocks consumed are digested. Though, that does reduce the permanence of the vore, or create extra complexity to explain Trixie not being a clone.