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Little Lamia in the Big City (REDUX) is a crowd-funded series to rewrite an old vore story I had written back in 2010 about a chubby pink naga who has to learn to live in a modern city.
This chapter was funded by Dracon_Kitsune.
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A day in the life of Denyu, part three! I apparently never posted chapter 128. Whoops. I finished it weeks ago! And now I am done 129! So you get two chapters today.
Posted by ArcaneSigil 2 years ago Report
So... now Kira is Denyu and Denyu's just gone? I'm confused.
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Denyu is essentially asleep and Kira is piloting for now , at least that’s what I saw
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
Correct.
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
Nah, Denyu is fine! She's just dormant.
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Posted by Perodian 2 years ago Report
Does that mean if she wakes up, she'll be like a split personality?
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Lmao I feel like the only person I’d feel bad if they died in this part is either Talia or Leyla. I hope leyla survived …. Or not XD
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Posted by ArcaneSigil 2 years ago Report
I'd feel bad if they all died honestly. I've grown to like the lamias in this story.
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
I like them but at the same time it’s such a cruel and casual setting that , tbh if the main character permanently died . I’d be ok with it . That’s just the way that world works
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Posted by Aickavon12 2 years ago Report
Leyla still has a chance, Talia seems she'll survive. But Garnet is a Goner. Oops
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
Her and the oreo naga are still wiggling and churning in Diana's tailgut. :> We'll see how they fare in the next chapter probably.
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Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report
Going to hope that Leyla and the other 2 make it out.
BTW, how many chapters until the end?
Also, how would Mithra would react with Kira in Denyu's body?
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Posted by Alexwwpyro 2 years ago Report
Strangely this is one of few stories where I care whether or not the main character is gone forever
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Posted by Perodian 2 years ago Report
I find the magic usage here interesting, in part because I have read a lot of fantasy settings, a lot of vore stories don't put a ton of detail into it. I was curious for a while about Clio's powers and this provides some nice insight. It was also nice to see a resurrection of the main character that came with consequences. In this case, Denyu is temporarily gone and cannot be enjoyed by Kira in physical form. This story has been pretty interesting even though it doesn't have much of a plot.
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
Clio is fucking scary and this was a chance to show how scary. c:
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Posted by RG9812 2 years ago Report
Damn kira mom does not play around would love to see more of her in her youth before she had kira and her sister
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Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report
Read Legends of Peran.
You get to see the adventures of Kira's parents after they first met.
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Posted by RG9812 2 years ago Report
Sweet
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Posted by Gorgrath177 2 years ago Report
Jeez it’s a miracle anyone survives for any amount of time with how often nagas go for live meals.
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Posted by Morphy 2 years ago Report
Heh, seriously. The naga birth rate must be /astronomical/ to keep up with all the self-predation-- besides their habitual devouring of anyone else dumb enough to hang around nagas in general. I'd assume the resources back at home must also be ramped up quite high to account for all that mass.
If there was anything higher on the food chain (back in the naga homeland obviously), it must be absolutely terrifying in person.
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Posted by CarlosKukul 2 years ago Report
You know...I think I understand why people are fucking terrified of Clio. Holy shit...
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
>:D
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Posted by CarlosKukul 2 years ago Report
Also, I gotta ask. Is this still "nice" by her standards?
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
Yes.
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Posted by CarlosKukul 2 years ago Report
I had a feeling lol
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Posted by Allard-Liao 2 years ago Report
I foresee a pouting Mithra next chapter.
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Posted by Razgriz 2 years ago Report
Poor Leyla, Garnet and Oreo. XD
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Posted by Razgriz 2 years ago Report
and poor Talia got her soul damaged. :x that sounds bad.
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Posted by SpamMeister 2 years ago Report
Hmm
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Posted by Dongers 2 years ago Report
I hope Kira remembers Oreo and Garnet. It's almost a given that she recognises Layla pretty much instantly, so no worries there, but I hope the other two make it out.
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Posted by Ssublissive 2 years ago Report
The absolute insanity of this chapter is unreal. It would have been hot to see Diana digest Denyu, but it looks like fate has other plans.
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Posted by corgiman97 2 years ago Report
Very happy about seeing more Mithra!
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Posted by cloud8745 2 years ago Report
Very good chapter! Favorite part was once again Mithra; she is always incredible.
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Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report
Just realized something: couldn't Clio use Diana's body by taking her soul out instead of Talia in that situation? Could saved her magic and time, plus damage soul of Diana would be more deserved than Talia who was used due to Clio's rage?
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Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report
She mortally wounded Diana already. So not really.
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Posted by EuritheSnek 1 year ago Report
clio: tears souls out of bodies and nearly kills a few people for fucking with her daughter and her daughters lover.
Also clio: that was being nice. I didn't kill any of the bystanders. and the city is still standing
kira: moooo-ooommmmmmmm!
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