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A short, silly drabble. Akane returns home to find that Shampoo might have gotten... a little carried away. Now it's up to her to figure out a way to relieve the Amazon's torment... oh and maybe save Ranma too, or something.
Edit: Fixed a bunch of typos that were bugging me, made the story more uh... boobalicious on request.
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Posted by VoidInVoid 2 years ago Report
Do you have a possible picture planned to pair beside this paraphilic prose, or will this tale tarry in terse text till time's termination?
Posted by Kiyoa 2 years ago Report
it's a fun idea for sure; I'll see if I can fit a doodle in at some point but I'm a bit busy atm
Posted by VoidInVoid 2 years ago Report
I just found it surprising that one who uploads mostly visual art would post a written piece sans a related picture. Neither hope nor disappointment, just surprise.
Posted by Znonymous 2 years ago Report
Love your fun Ranma stuff. More so the girls getting bigger.
Posted by Kiyoa 2 years ago Report
with an idea this silly, I felt like I had full freedom to make it as fun and silly as possible; glad it seems I succeeded =3
Posted by KlinKitty 2 years ago Report
Lovely stuff! Lewd, silly vore, everyone having a good time, and reformation? Exactly my cup of tea.
Posted by Kiyoa 2 years ago Report
heck yeah!
Posted by Arkron 2 years ago Report
My one criticism about this story is that we have a mention, at the beginning of the story, about Ranma's "ludicrously sized" breasts... but then no mention of them whatsoever for the rest of the story at least until the very end, which becomes even more disappointing when it's time to describe Ranma going from Shampoo's nuts to Akane's stomach, her entire upper body is ignored, going straight to describing the butt, thighs and calves while ignoring the head, chest and arms.
That aside, it's a pretty neat story, and I love the idea of "transferring prey", be it through a kiss to go from stomach to stomach, from rimming to go from butt to stomach, through a blowjob to go from nuts to stomach... or plain old good fuck to go from those nuts, straight into that womb! Or ass!
Also, this site desperately needs an "edit comment" feature.
Posted by Kiyoa 2 years ago Report
ah, was trying to give the impression of how forceful and quickly things were happening by having Akane only start becoming aware of what was going on by the time Ranma was already halfway down; well... there a bunch of typos that are annoying me anyway, so maybe I'll do some revision and re-upload it
Posted by Kiyoa 2 years ago Report
alrighty, changes made; hopefully they're to your taste, haha XD
Posted by MugenNoSaga 2 years ago Report
It has been a long long time since you share with us one of your writings. I'm happy about this ♥
Posted by Kiyoa 2 years ago Report
=3
Posted by Lonewolf 1 year ago Report
This is some really good writing. Do you plan on writing more in the future? An illustation of this would be awesome. I also enjoy when you add short stories under your drawings in the description.