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A certain fox girl from a certain toxic video game learns that her ability to suck the life out of people is a bit weirder than she thought. Hopefully that works out for her.
I'm proud to say that this should be a mostly lore-friendly fic of Ahri and her earlier days. Aside from the fetish stuff, of course. But that's what you're here for, isn't it?
Feel free to call me out on any details I missed. There's a ton of league lore now, so I'm sure there's something wrong with it.
I hope you enjoy, in any case.
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Posted by Manwad 2 years ago Report
I liked it.
Prose is solid, flow's good.
The little touches, the descriptions of smells and what a soul's mouthfeel is, was wonderful.
The little dynamic between her and the soul was good. Basic pred/prey but you executed it well with the little almost escape attempts.
The soldier dialogue was great. Little banter between them made 'em feel real despite how little time they had, and the action/dialogue flow was done well.
Posted by Malkordev 2 years ago Report
Aaaaa, thank you. This is a wonderful comment.
Yeah the soldiers were my favorite part to write! Happy to see someone else appreciated their dynamic.
Posted by Itsuune 2 years ago Report
Ooh this is really good. I like the sorta hybridization between object and soul swallowing and apple sized is perfect going down. You write really great prey fighting and the pred's struggling with the stomachache, I'd love to see you do more ;;
Posted by Malkordev 2 years ago Report
Geez, you flatter me. It's funny, I've enjoyed your work for years, and the prey in this was actually inspired by it. I sure didn't expect to receive the inspiration's blessing though!
Posted by Itsuune 2 years ago Report
You flatter me likewise! Can't believe things have come full circle like this. Glad I could've inspired you to share some of your skill!
Posted by Daniel14541 2 years ago Report
Hot!
Posted by Redhotbull6 2 years ago Report
Loved to story! Great work :D
Posted by Malkordev 2 years ago Report
Thank you, thank you. Glad you enjoyed!
Posted by Indighost 2 years ago Report
Wow, I loved the stomach ache scene. Great work. Almost missed this because the tags did not include indigestion
Posted by Malkordev 2 years ago Report
I'm thrilled to hear that from such a senior author in the community. Thank you.
And yeah, I was debating on the tag initially. Fixed!
Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report
Can't wait for more! (A sequel, or just more stories)