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Confident in his skill and magic, Sombra openly challenges Tempest Shadow to a duel... only to be served a humiliating comeuppance for his hubris!
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Well, here it is! The dice delivered what I've seen a lot of folks want in the comments: Sombra's first gurgly end in the guts of a mare. Which I don't have any complaints about myself; Tempest Shadow is about as underused a pred in my opinion.
But, the story isn't quite over yet! Sombra's soul remains intact, and thus he lives to coalesce and consume another day... as long as he's a little more circumspect. If he keeps getting himself eaten like this, he'll probably wind up lining a pair of flanks for good...
***EDIT***
Voting is closed! Next chapter by Monday
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Posted by thathawnter29 2 years ago Report
1
Posted by PitchPine 2 years ago Report
Dat ass
Posted by SilentOne 2 years ago Report
Indeed~
What's you're vote, by the way?
Posted by PitchPine 2 years ago Report
3 u3u
Posted by empatheticapathy 2 years ago Report
Favorite chapter so far.
And great choice of preds; Tempest Shadow could use a win.
1.
Let's make this Sombra's journey from king to preyslut.
Posted by SilentOne 2 years ago Report
Glad to hear you enjoyed it!
Posted by RDashiee 2 years ago Report
...Number 3 is...an unfairly hot idea in concept. I will go with that, even though I want Sombra to succeed :3
Posted by Dews 2 years ago Report
3
Posted by Br2nd66 2 years ago Report
can I do two? 1 and 3
Posted by Br2nd66 2 years ago Report
If only one, then 3
Posted by marcusthesmith 2 years ago Report
1
Posted by isjor1 2 years ago Report
3
Posted by whatif12 2 years ago Report
1
Posted by Rathalos122 2 years ago Report
3
Posted by dkia 2 years ago Report
Great Chapter I realy loved it. Nice seeing Tempest pred, With tempest being one of my favourite characters i think there is not enough stories with tempest as pred out there.
Posted by SilentOne 2 years ago Report
Agreed! Did you have a vote for the next arc?
Posted by dkia 2 years ago Report
That's hard choice. I want Sombra to succeed in at least part of his plan. I think i would vote for option 2 but seeing that i would by only on voting for that I vote for 1.
Posted by Jamesbrid 2 years ago Report
3, if sombra gets weaker this will happen more often, in theory the other 2 banes will lead to death more. Sombra needs to train when he reforms, and maybe find a book about notable ponies, gryphons, Hippogriffs ect to avoid until he is stronger.
Posted by empatheticapathy 2 years ago Report
Banes one and two will lead to death more, yeah, but bane three makes death turn into gameover faster.
Posted by empatheticapathy 2 years ago Report
Really hoping the will loss wins this one. If we can get his will low while keeping his spirit he, we'll have a lot more scenes like this.
Posted by Nebbie 2 years ago Report
1
Posted by Nebbie 2 years ago Report
While it's great this time around things weren't a cakewalk, I'm concerned that there's just a weakening coming. Hopefully along with that, Sombra will learn something from the way he was defeated, and be somewhat more prepared in the next magic fight.