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Tags: 2nd Person androgynous androgynous pred Anthro Anthro Pred Anthro Prey Bear bearwolf Bibrachial Bibrachial Biped Biped Bipedal Bibrachial Caila Caring pred Casual Casual pred Casual predator Casual vore Centaur Centauress Centauress pred college Consensual Digestion Noises Disposal Disposal Scat dorm dormitory Ezry Fart Female Female Pred Female Prey Flush Flushing Fox Fox neko Fox Neko Prey Full tour Gas Goo helping the pred Helping to Clear a Clog Hidden Name Meaning Honey Bee Slime honey slime honey slimegirl Huge Toilet Human Implied Digestion Indut Kaj Lamia Lamia Pred Large Large Pred Lurnea M/M M/multiple prey Male Male Pred Male Prey Naga Non-fatal Off-screen vore Onomatopoeia Perinne plug Plug School Post Vore Scat Post-Vore Predator regurgitating prey Regurgitation Same Size Scat scat burial school sea monster Second Person Perspective Second Person POV Size difference Slime smothered Smothering Snake Soft Vore squat toilet Stomach Stomach Noises taunting teasing Unwilling unwilling to willing Willing Wolf
The first few nights drawing to a close, Indut was trapped inside his snake friend's gullet, what will their reaction be in the morning, and will Indut see another dawn?
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This is the third story in "The Prey in the Group" series.
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(Spoilers)
(Character Quote: "It is a matter which your, delicious ehm, delicate proficiencies would be well placed." -Kaj)
(Quick guide:
Waking up, Female pred, regurgitation, as promised, teasing friend, drooly and droopy.
After 1st: Poor sleep schedule, confronted in class. Farting, gas, help with congestion, anal vore, anal insertion, dirty anal vore, scat, androgenous male pred.
After 2nd: A regular day of class, trapped in an ass, off-screen oral vore.
After 3rd: Sticking out of an ass, playful teasing and gas.
After 4th: Post-vore scat, full tour, disposal, scat, huge scat, wide squat toilet, almost flushed.
After 5th: Willing realisation, uncomfortable bed, helpful friends. )
(Legend:
Cent: Short term for centimetre.
Deci: Short term for decimetre.
Chronicle: A series of stories connected but not sequential. Ongoing stories without regular updates.
Rapacitor: A predator who eats for the sake of greed and gluttony.)
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Posted by Dongers 1 year ago Report
Maybe take a bit more time before you post something. The story is good, but it's very difficult to read. There's a ton of mistakes in there and you overuse sound effects too much and you clog up entire sentences with them.
They should mostly stand on their own, only rarely being used mid sentence because they usually break the flow. Also, some sound effects themselves are hard to read. I'm unsure if it's gurgling or moaning that your characters speak with, because it reads the same. A moan wouldn't write like mnfsfgs. A moan is a simple mmm, mhhm, mhaaah along those lines, whatever fits best, but yours reads closer to what a gutslut would sound like while being churned.
I'm invested in this story, so please consider this advice at least a little bit. Don't haphazardly throw your story around like that, it can be so good.
Posted by Septia 1 year ago Report
Sent you a Pm.
Some of the aspects you mention are intentional, and based on what the commissioner wanted. But I do want people who are intrigued by the concept to be able to enjoy the story, so I would be happy to discuss it with you further.