Posted by DoubleM 1 year ago Report

Younger version,please

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

This is the young character version. Originally I was also going to write an adult cast version, but with so many other stories to work on, I never got around to it.

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

Only got halfway through before nutting. Holy fuck this is wrong and hot!!!

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

lol, the best kind of compliment <3

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

Finally finished. I'm entirely spent. This was superb!!! Again, your buildup is amazing, and my gawd do you deliver!

Is there a community for this stuff? I feel like you just awakened a new fetish in me <3

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed the build up. I tried to avoid mentioning the quicksand explicitly in the intro and instead have them talk about "it" akin to how they might discuss sex, to help build up a prior association in the audience with "it" being a sensual type of experience.

As for a quicksand community, I'm not in any fandoms for it, but I was linked to this: https://www.quicksandfans.com

Posted by TheWildeWood 1 year ago Report

I had to take two runs at it myself.

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

So what you're saying is that five of the story girls didn't get a cum tribute, even as they gave up their lives for your reading pleasure? I guess they should have tried harder. <3

Posted by TheWildeWood 1 year ago Report

Technically, it would be four girls, since I got off to the last pair. Though I would say they all contributed, especially Imani. I loved your use of color with her, and I got off with Tess partially because of Imani anyway.

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

> I got off with Tess partially because of Imani

Tess's little body is going to be spinning deep in that quicksand pit knowing you got off to her because of her rival Imani.

> I loved your use of color with her

Thanks <3 I thought the patches of lighter and darker skin framed by the mud made for a pretty image too.

Posted by Madmrtvola 1 year ago Report

An overall pleasant read of a good length and style. Solo sinking, lesbian sinking, a form of corruption into sinking... I personally disagree with the amount of girls and their young age; quality over quantity and all that. On a related note, the mundanity of the sinking act and its implied commodity kind of goes against the inherent taboo and horror of the genre; but to each their own.

Were it up to me, I would have had a female camp supervisor searching for the girl, who went missing after hearing horror stories about the nearby quicksand from her group mates, only to find her pleasuring herself as she slowly sinks to her doom. After being found out the girl would then focus into seducing the supervisor through the display of exhibitionistic masturbation, which would succeed in getting the supervisor to first masturbate to the girl and then enter the quicksand for some brief lesbian intercourse. After the girl breathed her last, the supervisor would the reject her opportunity to climb out of the quicksand in favour of also sinking in with style.

In any case, this was a good story.

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

I'm certainly not averse to writing quicksand content as peril/horror, I've done lots of peril stories, but in this case the commissioner wanted a more welcoming/accepting vibe for it.

That's a fun scenario with the camp supervisor you outlined, certainly makes a show of of it, kind of like Tess.

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed the story even if a few parts weren't to your preference.

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

I loved this take on it. There's nothing I would change <3

Posted by TheWildeWood 1 year ago Report

Another pleasurable read Bunny, well done!

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

Thank you <3

Posted by quskow 1 year ago Report

I was so excited to find this that I had to comment. There used to be a lot of willing/fatal stories on quicksandfans but those authors have been gone for years now. These days I'm grateful for any new story, but this one is well written and with such varied and taboo content! Hope to see more in the future.

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

That's very kind of you to have taken the effort to register just for this, I appreciate it <3

And yeah the lack of similar stories is one of the reasons I was commissioned for this. The commissioner has requested another slot that'd involve similar themes, so something to look forward to, but it'll be a while before I get to it as my queue is loooooooooong.

Posted by coxjames 1 year ago Report

Not my cup of tea but written so well it still was a mild turn on!

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

Thank you, one of the best types of compliment~

Posted by Unwack 9 months ago Report

Holy shit! Bella and Kaela’s experience before and after dipping into the muddy pit for their first and last time is the best I’ve ever read. Bella’s fingering guide to indulge her sister’s masturbation when glancing at Imani’s final submerge, the erotic lower spine to front chest rub position when Kaela finally outmatched Bella’s arousal, the sensational orgasmic screams in unity, and their faint muffle climaxes when several bubbles started popping one by one. Amazing work, BunnyWrites!!

Posted by BunnyWrites 9 months ago Report

Aww thank you, that's very kind praise <3

I really enjoy pairing the plot side of the arc, in this case with the sinking, with the full arc of a sexual act. From the teasing start, the more eager embrace of growing sultry emotions, the overwhelming intensity of an approaching climax, and finally the soft release of ecstasy. So I'm happy to hear you got so much from that arc too <3