Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

I'm a chaos writer, So, take my comments with a grain of salt.

I missed Emma, this story was set up perfectly for betrayal, bidding, Emma wins but has her cooked

Restaurant, Emma bought a special cut.

Both missed chances in my mind.

Other than that, great story. You're far better than me in so many ways.

Posted by ineedallaccs 1 year ago Report

I considered bringing her back for a betrayal but ultimately decided to focus on Amy. Maybe ill make a sequel about what happened to her.

Really appreciate the feedback although I wouldn't agree I'm better than anyone.

Posted by blueblue124 1 year ago Report

<3 Getting cooked up on vacation is like my number 1 fantasy, absolutely adored this.

Posted by ineedallaccs 1 year ago Report

Glad you enjoyed it, hopefully more to come soon

Posted by emikochan 11 months ago Report

amazingly well written, I loved this :D

Posted by ineedallaccs 11 months ago Report

Thank you very much for the kind words