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It was the end of the world. After a strange fog rolled in, the entire world's population shrank down to tiny sizes over a few days. These new tinies must now scratch out new lives from the refuse of the gigantic, now alien world they had built. Yet even now the noxious fog laid thick, threatening to shrink them even further. But it's not the fog the survivors should be worried about, but rather one of those who didn't shrink...
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0GFRcFm-aY
(Linked here for obvious reasons.)
Phew, first proper story I've posted here in a while now! Feels good to post something back here. A short piece I wrote up for a friend, then fleshed out, expanded (word count multiplied by about four times), and touched up to post. Big thanks to those who helped check it over before I posted it. The method of how the prey in this are swallowed are definitely something I haven't seen before in vore.
Left both the gender of the pred and prey ambiguous, hopefully so you can imagine them as whatever you'd personally like. Finally, I will admit that Fallout 4's radstorms were definitely an inspiration for the whole visual of the clouds.
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Posted by jimmypootron 1 year ago Report
I really love this set up! Great work on the descriptive settings, although the ambiguity of the giant works well casting it as a giant somewhat alien monster I feel like adding some identity to the tiny humans would have made that contrast a lot stronger, great read though, really enjoyed it!
Posted by VividLucidity 1 year ago Report
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the descriptions that I undoubtedly spent waaaaaay too much time on. As for your point about the prey, honestly, you're probably right. I probably should've put more detail on the prey, give them personalities, show them reacting to it in order to show just how otherworldy it is to them, human or not. I suppose the reason why I didn't give the prey identities is because it would've been work I didn't want to do. I'm not good with characters or dialogue. So I just kept the prey as an indeterminate 'entity', much in the same way a crowd of people in a macro story.
Still, thank you for commenting on my upload.