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(I'm a Kadaver) Alakazam By alittletrolling -- Report

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Tags: 1st person badger pred Coyote prey Crushing prey crying pred dominant observer F/M Female Pred horror lizard prey Male Prey monologue slight gore Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey

Here he comes
Here comes the bastard
Anonymity is a virtue
In this day and age
Flagrant misuse of security
Better run, run, run, run, run, run run run run, run

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Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report

OH CRAP! NO WONDER YOU SAID THIS WAS AN IMPORTANT ENTRY TO READ. THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE MOST EXCITING ONES YET.

Once it clicked on whom we were following, I had to see this through to the end. The moments with him were lovely to read, his loneliness, his interests, the things of life he enjoyed and lost, it makes him so... human (lol). Your writing here really shines. I’m in the desert with him, freezing, eating Mexican sweet breads.

Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report

Holy shit you don't know how much your comment means to me! This story, i put more of my heart and soul into it than ever. I thought nobody was on board with my first person voice! I'm so glad you enjoyed the writing!

Seriously, this means a LOT!

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