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Tags: Anthro Anthro Pred Anthro Prey Digestion Dragon Dragon prey Dragoness Dragoness Prey F/F F/F Vore Female Female Pred Female Prey Giantess giantess prey larger prey Macro Macro pred Micro Micro Prey Mouse Mouse pred Oral Vore Rita the Mouse Short Story shortstack shortstack pred smaller pred Soft Vore Willing Pred Willing prey
Short story involving Rita eating a dragon.
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Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
i think trhere was an error . it says ""Now, you don't have to worry about being hungry again. You can live in my stomach and eat whatever you want!" but rita ate the dragon so shouldnt it say ""Now, you don't have to worry about being hungry again. i can live in your stomach and you can eat what ever you want!"
stil a good story
Posted by Gassythecat 1 year ago Report
Thanks but do you think I should fix the error?
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
a quick rewrite of the phrasing should work . try saying "Now, you don't have to worry about being hungry again. i can live in your stomach and you can eat what ever you want!"
Posted by Gassythecat 1 year ago Report
Okay! I am quickly going to fix it since I don't want to rewrite a whole story.