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I'm going to hell for writing this lol
A summer pool party turns deadly for one young girl thanks to the family dog.
I don't know why I got inspired to write this, but I did and then I banged it out in about an hour, so... yeah. It's another kinda mean-spirited quick and dirty vore story with a victim who really doesn't deserve it. Enjoy.
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Posted by anyonarex 1 year ago Report
Classic scenario. X3 great story, well written,
Posted by pendingdeletw02gb523942 1 year ago Report
Thanks! These classic setups never get old, eh. Kinda like Lauren now ;)
Posted by ErRynArya 1 year ago Report
This is a very awkward story for me given that my name is Jack and my last name is Harris lmfao. I never thought I'd see the day
Posted by pendingdeletw02gb523942 1 year ago Report
Yikes. Sorry about that. I’m still waiting for that day myself, but my real name is a lot rarer than the one I use here, so I doubt it’ll happen.
Posted by ErRynArya 1 year ago Report
I imagine it happens to everyone on here eventually lol
Posted by theteen73 1 year ago Report
Definitely not me. Idk if I’ve found one with my real first name. I’ll go look.
Posted by GilPix 1 year ago Report
For a quick glump & dump story I say you did pretty fantastic! Lots of nice set piece details in here that makes me think about I'm going to not forget about it for a while.
Posted by pendingdeletw02gb523942 1 year ago Report
Thanks, that’s great to hear! The little details are always my favourite part of a story.
Posted by HMDVore 1 year ago Report
Nice story. Love the bit where he has to scoop up the heavy, dense remains of his friend and throw them in the trash~
Posted by pendingdeletw02gb523942 1 year ago Report
Wow, that’s a bit like hearing Stanley Kubrick tell me he liked my film. Praise from a master. I’m really glad you liked it!
Posted by Shawn377 1 year ago Report
Hey just asking maybe you should make an alternate ending like the dog gets eaten instead?
Posted by pendingdeletw02gb523942 1 year ago Report
I do human prey only. And generally human pred only too, this was a one-off exception. So that won't be happening, sorry.
Posted by DrDeagle 1 year ago Report
Man i love any scenario where animals eat someone whole and dont even realise they've done something wrong
Just casually going about their day after as whoevers inside gurgles <3
Only wish that part was longer in the story, like one of the kids coming up to the doggo tum and observing it and stuff