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Alexa and her mom go to Churners for lunch.
Only Alexa's mom leaves.
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Posted by Mentald 1 year ago Report
i assume she was reformed after a year as did her friend's and they all had a come back party where they all ware eaten by her mom and Alexa was the only one not enjoying it
Posted by Datstrudel 1 year ago Report
No, this is fatal
Posted by mrsirman 1 year ago Report
I was thrown off by you writing the mother saying “And my daughter is bummed about her friends being eaten, can you show her how nice it is to get digested?” because the only way a person with the capacity to feel empathy could say that is if there was reformation.
Posted by Datstrudel 1 year ago Report
It wasn't supposed to be a lack of empathy and more of a scenario where it's just so ingrained in the world's culture that no one really minds vore and that it's just considered normal to be eaten.
Posted by mrsirman 1 year ago Report
Right, I understand that now. It's certainly not the first time such a concept has been used on this website. I don't quite remember the exact name as it's used in literature but in films it's called a social Thriller. Basically casual vore is so expected in society that our real world ideals of empathy and morality aren't even brought into question witnessing it, you were going for something like that in your writing right?
Posted by Datstrudel 1 year ago Report
Exactly.