Posted by MrPeculiar 1 year ago Report

Very cute little fic! Adored this. Your writing's fantastic and it's got a lovely charm. Haven't watched this animu but I'm sure Jun had a very cute and lovely snack.

Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report

I haven't watched the anime, or read the manga, but your story is good. I like how you have quite a bit of buildup, and how Jun is trying to understand his feelings for Tomo. I don't understand if Jun's obsession over Tomo's shoes is canon, or if it is just your kink. Its fine either way.
I like the part where both Jun, and Tomo are searching for each other, and collide. I know it is an anime trope, but I still like it in a vore story to help establish sexual tension. I also like that Jun kisses her and uses that as his opportunity to eat her.
My biggest problem is that the story feels like it ends too abruptly. This is probably because I have a kink for post vore stuff. I would have liked the story to continue, and detail how hard it is for Jun to get home, whether or not he swallows air for Tomo, and other things like whether or not Tomo has her phone on her inside Jun's stomach, or if it is still in her bag.

This is a charming story, that had me interested in it, and I really liked it, in spite of my complaints. You are a good author with your own style, so I watched your page.

Posted by Ashley_Urikoshima 1 year ago Report

Regarding the 'ending', don't worry. There juuuust might be more to come.

Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report

YAY!!!!!!

Posted by MegamanX20 1 year ago Report

Hello there!