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Salutations my sumptuous snacks~
I've got a huge craving for critique, compliments and commentary so I'm making this blog for people to tell me what they think about my stories. Whether that's stroking my swollen ego or forcing your feedback down my gullet, I'd really appreciate it!
I'm mostly looking for simple suggestions such as "goddamn give it a rest with the alliteration!" or "I prefer big BUuUUuOOooORrRPPPps over 'he belches bigtime' any day of the week!" that I can take into consideration with relative ease. After all, the point of this is to write some relatively low-effort, high self-enjoyment stories that my empty head can put together in around an hour, so I'm probably not going to be able to integrate complex literary techniques or perfect punctuation when my spunk-filled skull can't really comprehend editing once it's blown its load on the page.
If this doesn't get any responses I guess I'll eat away my embarrassment. Save a life (or ten) and feed me feedback~!
I've got a huge craving for critique, compliments and commentary so I'm making this blog for people to tell me what they think about my stories. Whether that's stroking my swollen ego or forcing your feedback down my gullet, I'd really appreciate it!
I'm mostly looking for simple suggestions such as "goddamn give it a rest with the alliteration!" or "I prefer big BUuUUuOOooORrRPPPps over 'he belches bigtime' any day of the week!" that I can take into consideration with relative ease. After all, the point of this is to write some relatively low-effort, high self-enjoyment stories that my empty head can put together in around an hour, so I'm probably not going to be able to integrate complex literary techniques or perfect punctuation when my spunk-filled skull can't really comprehend editing once it's blown its load on the page.
If this doesn't get any responses I guess I'll eat away my embarrassment. Save a life (or ten) and feed me feedback~!
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Posted by penguins 4 months ago Report
I think your recent works are some of the best male-focused mass vore works written ever. I really appreciate the work you do. Your tastes are well-aligned with mine (and I appreciate that you make human versions).
I particularly like the emphasis on the sensations the predator feels - it's very sensual.
Posted by Nekhet 4 months ago Report
I'm so glad to hear, thank-you! The senses are definitely something I focus on in my writing~
PS thanks for the heads up on part 11 of DoG, I've reuploaded it!