Salutations my sumptuous snacks~

I've got a huge craving for critique, compliments and commentary so I'm making this blog for people to tell me what they think about my stories. Whether that's stroking my swollen ego or forcing your feedback down my gullet, I'd really appreciate it!

I'm mostly looking for simple suggestions such as "goddamn give it a rest with the alliteration!" or "I prefer big BUuUUuOOooORrRPPPps over 'he belches bigtime' any day of the week!" that I can take into consideration with relative ease. After all, the point of this is to write some relatively low-effort, high self-enjoyment stories that my empty head can put together in around an hour, so I'm probably not going to be able to integrate complex literary techniques...
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