Steep Learning Curve: Part Two
Uploaded: 8 months ago
Owner: DocClamor
Tags: Soft Vore Unbirth F/F Fatal Masturbation Unwilling Prey Shrinking Unwilling Pred Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred teasing forced vore Human Pred Graphic digestion Cruel Pred Uncaring Observers regretful pred Crushed prey
With Zoe's disappearance weighing heavily on her mind, her best friend, Claire, takes it upon herself to find out what happened. Unfortunately for her, Lilith doesn't take too kindly to accusations.
Longest story so far, couple more things buried in here that I hope some of you appreciate. I got bogged down with some commission work for other stuff and have been skimping on this lately, so it's finally here! Hope it was worth it haha.
Comments are always welcome....
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DocClamor - 7 months ago
Hey, that's high praise from one of my favorite's on the site. I appreciate that man, thanks. :D
Gapemaw - 7 months ago
Excellent
DocClamor - 8 months ago
Haha, who knows what’s going to happen? ;-)
zargein - 8 months ago
The bitch must die!
Uploaded: 10 months ago
Owner: DocClamor
Tags: Soft Vore F/F Unwilling Prey Shrinking Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Burping Graphic digestion Cruel Pred Uncaring Pred drugged prey Teasing Pred Uncaring Observers Oblivious observer
Luna's absolutely obsessive nature with her idolized goddess leads her down a road of regretful pleasure. Will her compassion for a loved one prevent her from making a life-altering mistake? Tags say probably not.
The second chapter of my very first story. Let me know what you honestly think. Comments are always welcome. Seriously, anything you have to say, I want to hear, I encourage it!
Largely inspired by iliketoread’s “The Greatest Magician… Ever?” Fantastic...
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zargein - 8 months ago
Fair enough, either way keep it up. I'm so excited!
Animo24 - 8 months ago
Awesome!!! :D
DocClamor - 8 months ago
Might happen, it might not. Can't honestly say for certain because I tend to write things akin to my own personal tastes, but we'll see!
DocClamor - 8 months ago
Of course! Currently knocking out some commission work but once things slow down I'll be continuing a few of these while doling out some new ones.
zargein - 8 months ago
I love this so much, but can you make one where the poor little thing doesn't get digested? I love the panic and the pleas and especially the swallowing, but I always feel bad for the poor girls, even the mean ones.
Uploaded: 10 months ago
Owner: DocClamor
Tags: Soft Vore F/F Fatal Masturbation unaware Unwilling Prey Shrinking Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred teasing Human Pred Graphic digestion Cruel Pred Uncaring Pred
Lilith has always had it out Zoe, treating the class genius like total garbage any chance she got. After one too many missteps in her own educational pursuit, the unlikely duo are paired together for one last study session.
Also, my first story with more graphic digestion, let me know if it was too much or too little.
Comments are always welcome. Constructive criticism, suggestions or even just showing some love, anything is appreciated. Seriously, anything you...
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TinyHunter - 10 months ago
I think your dialogue and characters are believable, which I find is pretty rare on this site. That's the main thing that pulls me into a story like this.
I like how many of your preds like Lilith don't initially plan to vore their prey, because of how fucked up it is, but once it's convenient for them they give into their darker impulses. That makes them feel more real to me as well.
Beyond that I just like mean bitches making nice girls into their lunch, lol. Your story definitely scratched that itch.
DocClamor - 10 months ago
Hey hey! Really appreciate the kind words, to hear my writing is “good” is encouraging haha, thanks! Mind if I asked what in particular you liked?
TinyHunter - 10 months ago
Goddamn, this is like my perfects scenario...well done dude, always nice to see a new good writer on this site.
DocClamor - 10 months ago
Wasn't sure which angle to go with, bully getting their way or the victim getting their revenge. Glad I chose right haha
iliketoread - 10 months ago
Hot
Uploaded: 10 months ago
Owner: DocClamor
Tags: Soft Vore F/F Fatal Masturbation Implied Digestion Unwilling Prey Shrinking Betrayal Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred tricked prey Cruel Pred drugged prey Teasing Pred
With no one else to turn to, Kristen grew increasingly desperate to fix her increasingly anxious mind and resorts to therapy. Ava Lockwood is the best of the absolute best after all, what could possibly go wrong?
Another one in just a few days, really cooking with grease here. Comments are always welcome. Constructive criticism, suggestions or even just showing some love, anything is appreciated.
Thumbnail is AI generated because I'm still broke as all hell.
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DocClamor - 8 months ago
It’s honestly something I feel I struggle with depicting in some instances. Not sure I add to much detail or not enough, but I’m glad it worked out in this instance. Thanks man.
zargein - 9 months ago
I love how she struggled to swallow the poor little thing. Makes me feel like she is working for the pleasure.
DocClamor - 10 months ago
Oh wow, that was incredibly encouraging to read haha. Huge fan of your work personally, I actually drew a lot of inspiration from your style and tried to make something of my own with it.
I'm really trying to delve into different aspects of cruelty so I'm probably going to have quite a bit of different tones to some of these stories, this one probably being one of the sadder ones dialogue-wise.
Thanks a lot my friend, really appreciate the kind words. Cheers.
iliketoread - 10 months ago
Great stories, both this one and 'The Show Must Go On'! In the TSMGO, I really enjoyed the tension/conflict being built up of from Alisa constantly calling Jennifer, 'Jen'. It was emphasized throughout the story enough so that when Jennifer finally decided to devour Alisa, it added to the believability. And honestly Alisa deserved it at that point LOL, even when she was getting swallowed she was yelping, 'Jen'. Also I'm a sucker for the webcam - people watching it happen - scenario, so that was pretty sweet.
As for Neoteric Therapy, I liked that the characters got to have more meaningful dialogue (even if it was rather sad) which made the actions Ava feel much more meaningful. By the end of it all I just felt bad for Kristen, but I guess for you, as the writer, thats a good thing. I should also mention that I love how you described the swallowing scenes in both stories. Makes the prey feel substantial to the pred which is god tier. Plz keep that up.
I don't have much in the way of constructive criticism, I think you're a great writer, but if you're interested I can PM you. Keep up it up, I'll be looking forward to what you write. Cheers!
DocClamor - 10 months ago
Thanks man, I’m hoping to step it up, really improve and churn out some more stuff.
Uploaded: 11 months ago
Owner: DocClamor
Tags: Soft Vore F/F Fatal Implied Digestion Unwilling Prey Shrinking Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Human Pred Cruel Pred Streaming Uncaring Observers
After an excruciating day at work Alisa wanted nothing more than to settle in at home, grab some food and veg out for the rest of the night. Unfortunately for her, her roommate's a mukbang streamer and she's stripped the place clean of all food. Desperate times call for desperate measures and Alisa makes a decision she'll soon regret.
First story! Nervous as all hell but hope some out there appreciate it. Comments are always welcome. Constructive criticism, suggestions or even...
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Gapemaw - 6 months ago
A very promising first offering.
Hit's a lot of the best buttons
Animo24 - 9 months ago
Ohhh this was some AMAZING. I really loved fhe setting and how the chat was involved. The tease at the end about the drug hit allll my buttons
DocClamor - 11 months ago
Thanks brother, I appreciate that! I really want to explore the different avenues of cruel nature, this one being more of a "conflicted" style was fun to write, glad you liked it!
Grec0R0man - 11 months ago
Fantastic! Dude, this was NICE. Great detail, love how Jennifer was both willing and somewhat unwilling of a pred, and I cannot wait to see what your going to do next! <3
DocClamor - 11 months ago
Hey hey! Appreciate the kind words, it’s really encouraging to see comments like this. I’ve got a ton more coming in the near future, so thanks for boosting the motivation.
Gapemaw - 6 months ago
Hahaha, I guess you never know
I appreciate your appreciation. I've got a bunch of projects in different states of completion... I need to get something out.