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For as long as she can remember, Briana has noticed a strange noise coming from her guts that she can't explain...at least until trip to the doctor brings the truth to light, as well as reminders from her past.
Mild spoilers from this point on, as usual.
Oh boy, this is another true sicko idea like Shitty Situation that wormed it's way into my sick mind and just wouldn't leave until I wrote it down. I'm having trouble deciding if this one is less or more gross than that one, but I guess you guys can be the judge.
This is actually a super old idea I had that I only remembered recently, and once I did I couldn't stop thinking about it. I didn't intend for it to turn out this way, but as I wrote it began to realize it's kind of like an old timey horror story, like a stupid perverted version of Poe's "The Tell-Tale Heart." I'm actually not really sure how to tag this story, does this count as vore or post-vore? It's definitely different from anything else I've written...
Anyway, I know I haven't posted in a while; haven't really been feeling the motivation to write the next chapter of Worth a Shot but hopefully the inspiration comes back to me. I also have another more vanilla standalone vore story that's mostly done and probably coming soon, so if this kind of fucked up shit isn't your cup of tea you have that to look forward to.
Anyway, as usual let me know what you think! Your comments are my motivation to keep writing, and the feedback really does help.
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Posted by AlbertKwon9182 9 months ago Report
Good to have you back! I’ve missed your giantess stories so much.
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Good to be back! For whatever reason I tend to always go kinda dormant in the winter.
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 9 months ago Report
This is diabolical! Your giantess stories never disappoint. I think your "sicko" ideas are actually growing on me. Along with your Shitty Situation story, this one really struck me as a blast that uncaring giantess' piece of life merged with the Twilight Zone-style of bizarreness that the tiny has to go through. It was a great read. I now kinda wanna see more from the story of Briana and Heather. It is not every day I get to see a tiny (or according to Briana, a "parasite") stuck in the giantess' digestive system, barely alive and miserable, for nearly a decade of time. That concept alone is just magnificent. Hopefully, someday Briana will let Heather experience all her digestive essentials and bowel movements. If that day comes, I would very much like to take a peek at that story haha. Hope to see more of your "sicko" giantess ideas! These are some good stuff!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 9 months ago Report
I just realized that Briana only got to realize that there was some noise coming from her intestines when she was gassy or needed to go to the bathroom just after she moved to the condo because the condo was so upper-class and kept her surroundings silent, unlike Briana's previous housing options. Obviously, it was Heather, and she's been suffering and crying inside of Briana's digestive system for a long time, but Briana was just too busy with life and never had a chance to just keep things silent and listen closely to Heather's noise from her belly. This is a nice and cruel detail! This is why it took Briana so long to find Heather stuck in her intestines! To think that Heather would have been trying to (or not trying but couldn't help) make noise that would reach the world outside but was ignored for nearly a decade of time inside of a girl's intestines, and Briana did not care enough to even recognize that cry, it all makes things even more sicko but dramatic. Mad respect to your stroytelling.
Posted by doomed 9 months ago Report
lol briana is a bitch Xd
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Yeah, she really kinda showed her true colors in the end there, didn't she? :P
Sometimes the person you were in the past can feel like a total stranger to you, but a lot of times deep down, you're still that person to some degree.
Posted by Whereaminow27 9 months ago Report
Payback is a bitch. Briana is going to regret this dearly. and She will be the one to be beggin soon :)
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Out of curiosity, how do you think Heather will be able to get payback?
Posted by Mechdragon1k 9 months ago Report
I do love the concept, through the ending where the pred gives up so quickly. I mean she should really expect the prey to be upset.
I wonder if right diet and probiotics could help the tiny learn to surivive outside the belly. Could pay for it self as a medical study.
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Yeah, Briana's reaction is not a very logical one, definitely a deeply emotional response. In the end she just didn't possess the emotional maturity to accept her apology being rejected. She thinks of herself as a good person who simply made some mistakes in the past, but Heather not accepting her apology messes up that narrative a bit, so she lashes out...
Your second idea is an interesting one if I ever decided to do a sequel to this, but it would require effort Briana's part that I'm not sure she's willing to expend. As the story stands she seems far more likely to just move on with her life and ignore Heather. Maybe if Dr. Regan or the hospital offered her the right price for the study, I suppose.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 9 months ago Report
It just feels like a really tragic end, that cuts off very abruptly. I feel like that may be the point, but I do want to see a little on what happens next.
Maybe Briana can find herself getting reminded a couple times of it, or find herself with a tiny friend that gets eaten.
That would actually be possibly very powerful emotionally and tragic, with Briana getting her past thrown in her face again.
I was surprised Dr. Regan was so calm about it.
Posted by doomed 9 months ago Report
I suspect that the doctor has seen many cases like this or as I suspect was the implication , she did something similar as a teen
Posted by Kabei 9 months ago Report
Welcome back!!! Missed the stories you create, and this one didn't disappoint, loved how dark and twisted it is justifying a tinies life haha. Enjoyed it a lot.
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Yeah, I think this might be the darkest story I've done so far?
I'm pretty happy with how it turned out though. Without really meaning to, I ended up writing my favorite kind of little horror story.
Posted by Razorwind1 9 months ago Report
Nice return. Personally for me this story was depressing. It goes beyond the usual death stuff and into tragedy territory. Like this was genuinely disturbing and sad for me to read lol. I guess its not really for me but keep it up, it's still great work!
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
I think you probably won't be alone in feeling that way. It's probably the most twisted story I've done so far...makes me wonder if I should make a "red band" label for my more fucked up stories like this and Shitty Situation to kind of warn people.
I think one of the problems that comes with creating this kind of content is in the beginning being eaten alive seems like the ultimate most horrible fate...but then you write it enough times and it starts to feel vanilla. Every once and a while I feel like I need to push myself to "okay, but what would be even WORSE than that" territory to kinda keep my edge I guess.
Posted by Razorwind1 9 months ago Report
Never thought about it like that but I kinda like that thinking. Its like upping the ante. I will say youve probably made the first of this kind if vore story so you are a pioneer now lol
Posted by Tummylock 1 month ago Report
I have to say, you have such a talent to write that kind of sick and tragic scenarios, and I god how I love it. The tragedy, the agony, and the complete lack of empathy of the pred, such a masterpiece. I hope you do more things like this
Posted by TinyHunter 1 month ago Report
Thank you! Sometimes it feels weird to complimented for this kind of fucked up thing, but if peope enjoy it it's worth it I suppose lol.