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Taylor has never had any interest in shrinkies or the "pred challenge", but when her friend gifts her a tiny woman in a jar, she's forced to make a decision: help her get home, or just get rid of her?
Here's a more vanilla vore story to serve as a kind of palate cleanser after how ghastly I'm sure some of you found "The Parasite." Nothing too novel or creative her, I feel this story is just sort of a mashup of concepts I've already visited in previous entries. It's a little bit Amy Makes Three, a little Pet Tryouts, and a little Worth a Shot. The overall plot is actually pretty close to one of the potential original outlines for Pet Tryouts that I ended up scrapping.
Not sure how I feel about this one overall. I feel like I'm sort of disatisfied with it, maybe because it doesn't feel creative to me...but that's the weird thing about writing versus consuming this kind of content. I love to read a simple, no-frills vore story where girl eats girl, so maybe I should stop overthinking it haha.
Anyway, let me know what you guys think, as always I love the comments and feedback!
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Posted by Kasra 9 months ago Report
This is really excellently done!
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 9 months ago Report
2 giantess stories in a week! It’s Summer but it already feels like Christmas. Happy to see more of your stories!
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Hopefully there's more to come, haha. I've got one more quick one that I think I could bang out in the next couple weeks, just gotta find the time.
Posted by CaliTea 9 months ago Report
Your stories are always an incredible read and this one is no different <3 terrific job!
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Thanks! I feel like I usually second guess my own writing in the minutes before posting it, so it's always nice to hear people still like it :P
Posted by hersnack 9 months ago Report
Very good story. Good new giantess vore stories have been hard to find lately but this one was very good. In my opinion in a perfect world the story would be shorter, But i tend to feel that way about work from a lot of good authors.Well Done!
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
I feel you on both counts, the hunt for good content is a constant struggle, and I'm a notoriously lazy reader myself with this kind of thing.
If I could manage it, all my stories would be tight 10 pagers, but I'm just not that concise in my writing, I'm afraid.
Posted by Joe3e 9 months ago Report
Loved it!
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Wooh! I'm glad.
Posted by johnnyboy246 9 months ago Report
While I rly wasn't a fan of your most recent story, cuz I found it far too cruel and gross. I actually found myself liking this one a lot, so good job and keep it up! Id also like to make a render of it if you'd be okay with that
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
That's understandable, everyone has their line and I knew that story was going to cross it for a lot of people, glad you liked this one though.
And please do make a render! I'd love to see it!
Posted by johnnyboy246 9 months ago Report
awsome! il definetly pm you when i finish it ^w^. also just wanted to ask if there was any chance of you writting a story involving like a lesbian pred doing some more sexual licking or mouthplay, maybe even unbirthing. but than again that's just stuff i personally love seeing, seeing so feel free to ingnor if its not your thing xP
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
I have a potential story in the pipeline that involves some "insertion" though the pred is straight. I don't know if it's the next one to be released, but I'm hoping to get to it soon. Hopefully that scratches that itch for you whenever I get around to it.
You've made me realize that literally all my characters are straight (though maybe I've never said either way with June? I'd have to go back and check,) I should probably have at least one gay pred in my wheelhouse.
Posted by johnnyboy246 9 months ago Report
Ohh well I'm definitely looking forward to that ^w^. And yeah I'd love to see you write a gay pred!
Posted by johnnyboy246 9 months ago Report
and hey if you ever make a story with a bit of mouthpaly you can bet id make a lil render for that too ^w^
Posted by Tentacules 9 months ago Report
Scenarios like Cat and Mouse are some of my favorites, and you did an amazing job with this one. Although she teases a bit, I didn't feel that Taylor was absolutely cruel, which is really appreciated (of course, she's at least a little bit, since she makes poor Olivia her breakfast). Cruel predators are fun, but I also find that gentle or nuanced preds add real depth to the stories.
It was really nice to see Taylor's behavior evolve throughout the plot. This is something I particularly appreciate in your stories: there is real progression, whether it's about the characters, their behavior, or the situation. Nothing is too abrupt or sudden, and that makes the events all the more believable.
Once again, great story! :3
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback!
And yeah, for me, immersion is everything in this kinda stuff. If I don't believe the characters and their motivations in a fic it really dampens the experience for me. So I always try my best to give my characters coherent personalities and wants.
Like you astutely observed, Taylor wasn't really meant to be a cruel pred, more like a regular person forced into an extremely irregular situation. She's able to justify everything she does by framing it as her vs Olivia, but like she says, we'll never know how what decision she would've ultimately made had Olivia not tried to escape.
Posted by LazySWV 9 months ago Report
Heyyy, this is excellent! I love a good "shrunken experience" as much as vore, and although it's really hard to have a hunting/chase going on that doesn't feel ridiculously one-sided, you nailed it! Also props on describing the feeling of helplessness from being in a cereal bowl. Keep up the good work :)
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Yeah, it not being 100% one-sided is definitely the biggest challenge in writing that kind of scene...because for so many reasons it totally would be.
Which is part of the fun, admittedly, but sometimes you want to write more than just "the prey tried to run but immediately got grabbed."
Posted by hatter 9 months ago Report
It's simple but I loved this one. The pred's casual and natural attitude is perfect. Seems like it would be hard to get right but I think you nailed it.
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Thanks for saying so!
I think preds who are normal people are such a fun challenge to write. With Taylor my goal was for her to be about as "average" as possible--not overly kind of compassionate but also not a bitch--just someone trying to get through their day without major troubles.
It's tricky because usually I feel such a person wouldn't resort to swallowing someone alive, so I have to be very careful when constructing the pace and circumstances to keep it believable.
Posted by iliketoread 9 months ago Report
Love this story. Really enjoyed Taylor's attitude shift and the little stalemate her and Olivia have in the bedroom.
Thanks for writing and posting it! :)
Posted by TinyHunter 9 months ago Report
Glad you liked it, I think the "chase" leading up to vore is one of the most exciting parts. Usually it's just the pred toying with the prey though, and while that's fun in its own way, it's also fun to make the pred work for it every once and a while.