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Lindsey and Sydney are rivals--they're both up for team captain, but more importantly they're both in love with the same guy. Lindsey seems to be losing the battle for Charlie's heart, but then one day she gets some good news: her rival has caught the shrinking virus.
Another story without any real vore in it from me, though there are a lot of references to it, since it takes place in my usual shrinking virus setting. I've just been kind of on a general giantess/shrinking kick lately.
You might recognize the names of the lead characters from Cat and Mouse, and they are in fact the same girls Taylor thinks about near the start of that story. This was a story I kind of wrote by accident as a writing exercise. I have this idea for a story that acts as a sort of sequel to this, where the events of this story would've just been referenced without being fully explored...but then I just kind of began writing it out as I tried to get the details straight, and before I knew it I had a full story coming along. It'll all make more sense later if I actually get around to writing that one, which will contain some proper vore, but for now hopefully some of you can just enjoy a vanilla giantess dom/micro abuse story.
One of my favorite dynamics in size stuff is when girls take advantage of their rivals shrinking to finally come out on top in the rivalry. I'm surprised I haven't really written about it yet, but I doubt this will be the last time.
Also, man, I've been a real writing tear recently...and I'm sure it's only a matter of time before I burn out again and need a break, but for now I'm riding the high!
As usual, let me know what you guys think! Is there any demand for non-vore giantess stories like this, or do you have zero interest if there's zero real vore? (which is totally understandable, given what this site is about lol...)
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Posted by zargein 8 months ago Report
:)
Posted by Tentacules 8 months ago Report
No vore this time. But the story was still very interesting.
As you said, the absence of vore might attract fewer readers to this story. However, personally, I really enjoyed it. I like vore stories, but I like them even more when the vore happens late, or even very late in the story. I appreciate it when the relationship between the "pred" and "prey" characters, like Lindsey and Sydney here, takes its time to develop. For example, Sydney was a real pest throughout the story, and Lindsey didn't want to finish her off. But one could easily imagine a second chapter where their relationship evolves and the vore finally comes into play, either at the end of the second chapter or even much later.
What I mean is that long stories between a pred and a prey are quite rare, especially high-quality ones like yours. Yet, I'm sure there's an audience for them. I mean, there's at least one girl here.
Whatever you plan to write in the future, keep up the good work. Your stories are fabulous and very much appreciated.
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Thank you for the kind words!
And yeah I won't take it personally if people aren't interested in this one, I know I myself until very recently probably would've turned my nose up at a story on this site if it said "non-vore" haha. Never thought I'd start getting into non-vore giantess/shrinking content, but here we are...
Posted by Discordance 8 months ago Report
I dig these types of stories, anything with bad ends is always great. How we reach these ends is what makes your stories so unique and fun to read.
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Personally I've found the main thing that attracts me to vore is the dominance of the pred over the prey, and over time I've realized I don't even need there to be vore, so long as that dominance is established in some other way.
Posted by johnnyboy246 8 months ago Report
okay first off i loved this! esspecially the feet stuff. would love to see another part where lindsey uses sydney more... sexually >:). also i just wana say you never seem to amaze me with how horrible and psychopathic the preds you write can be, like im pretty convinced that lindsey kinda has some form of ASPD XD.
but like i also do kinda wish that sydney gets put out of her misery, cuz being lindseys pet dose sound like a fate worse than death xP
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Oh it definitely seems like she's not all there, haha. If she doesn't have a full blown mental disorder then she's at the very least extremely selfish and delusional, constantly insisting that she can't possibly kill Sydney because she's a good person but seemingly all too happy to basically enslave her...
Posted by johnnyboy246 8 months ago Report
i will say tho, that as messed up as what she's doing is, its just a really nice and instersting dynapic of pred and prey, esspecially the thing's that she dose to sydney. the idea's of one person having complete and udder domination over the other is just really hot, and honestly it kinda just makes me want a tiny pet of my owe >:)
Posted by doomed 8 months ago Report
poor charlie
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Eh, what he doesn't know can't hurt him.
Posted by johnnyboy246 8 months ago Report
I mean he still thinks his last girlfriend is dead, which definitely does hurt him mentally xP
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 8 months ago Report
Glad to see more of your giantess stories! Sometimes, death is a blessing. In a way, what Lindsey granted Sydney is a fate far worse than giantess vore and digestion, I think. This was a really creative giantess story, and well-written. You really are a good writer before a good giantess writer! Keep up the good work!
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Definitely in agreement that it's a worse fate. While I'm sure being digested would be agony, ultimately it's 30ish minutes then it's over...waking up every day, knowing you had to serve the whims of the person who had taken you away from your old life? Oof...