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When approached by a stranger in distress, investigative journalist/podcaster Judith Beaton takes on the case of an abducted shrinky in Dampton...only to quickly realize the case is much bigger than one missing shrinky. As she attempts to hone in on a suspect, the spider at the center of the web of disappearances, she begins with her main clue...a boy who matches the description of one at the scene of the crime, named Nate.
This is a sequel to my story Masquerade and the 15th Chapter in the Worth a Shot series.
Ooh boy, we gettin into it now...this is mostly a plot driven episode that serves to bridge us to chapter 16, but I managed to squeeze a little vore into it. Plus, it references a lot of older events from the series, so hopefully you can kind of relive those moments too.
One of the weirdest decisions I had to make this chapter was giving Nate a last name...I've always tried to kind of avoid this in the past, but it felt weird in the context of an investigation for Judith to only refer to him by his first name, so I just went with Johnson since it's pretty generic...also he's kind of Johnson in the derogatory sense. I probably should come up with last names for the other characters as well, but it just feels weird to introduce them at this point.
Also, I don't want to panic anyone, but I think the next chapter might be the last of the current Worth a Shot storyline...which is not to say that the story is going to end, but it's more like the end of "Book 1" of the story. I think there'll probably one more "book" of Worth a Shot to follow it, though it'll probably be shorter unless I come up with a bunch more ideas. Hopefully this all makes more sense once the following stories are posted, haha...
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy! I'm gonna try to keep up my frenzied writing streak until I at least get out chapter 16, but who knows, maybe I can keep it going longer...and as always, let me know what you guys think! What did you like, what did you wish I'd include, any ideas you have, etc. Always love to read and reply to that stuff.
Also...who are you rooting for? Judith or Nate? :P
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Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report
Such a distraction... I'll never get my own stories done!
Jokes aside I am in awe of how you're able to write such quality work so consistently and often. If you ever find out what is causing you to being able to be in frenzy mode for this long, don't hesitate to let me know your secret lol.
Oh and don't get me started on the last name thing. I actually don't remember but I think I also gave Jack a last name in one of my stories. I'm totally with you on that one. I still haven't ever explicitly given the reader Emma's last name, wonder if I ever will. ANYWAY I DIGRESS.
Who am I rooting for? -Nate (and Becca) for selfish reasons. But I feel that Judith does deserve justice so the internal conflict I'm experiencing between her and 'the others' is points for you as a writer. You're really getting the pot stirring here for this series, very exciting. For the actual narrative I think this episode does a good job. When reading the parts where Judith was pressuring Nate, I admit I laughed at how you described the poor boy's nervousness. "Nate blinked back at her in shock, sweat beading on his forehead and trickling down his face" Don't get me wrong, its all written extremely well, I just liked to imagine a cartoonish amount of sweat pouring down Nate's face, his eyes cartoonishly wide in shock. ...And I'm digressing again. I like that you've added Judith to the plot, she is a welcome addition. I have my guesses to what might happen in the following parts but I am very curious to see what you write and have in mind. The tiktok video with Melanie and Mira was an interesting way to help the reader sympathize with Judith, all while getting some of that sweet vore into the story. Very tell not say of you. I'm taking notes.
Also, I feel bad for not commenting on part 14 but I did really love that part. I'll try get to that when I get the chance. Thanks for writing so much good shit these past few weeks! Cheers!
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Haha, sorry for being such a distraction!
And I wish I could tell you what makes me go on these occasional writing binges...it's just like a compulsion or an addiction. It's actually really annoying, I start to make less time for other things in my life until eventually I crash and burn out...
Also funnily enough I have to send credit your way again for inspiration; the whole idea of an investigator getting on Nate's tail was also kind of lifted from the Finn character from your series. I knew pretty early on I wanted to try my own take on that, and just had to wait for the right moment in the story to bring them in.
Originally though, Judith was going to be more of a hardened Jessica Jones style detective with the same vored sister backstory, before I came up with the podcast angle and tweaked her personality to be more reserved and calculating.
Posted by Hobby 8 months ago Report
Whoa! Haven’t checked in a week or two and one of my favorite writers has three new stories for me. Can’t wait to read. Already sure they’re all classics.
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Haha, enjoy!
Posted by Razorwind1 8 months ago Report
You are on fire this month man! Dont be afraid to get some rest, youve earned it. Excited to see how this is all gonna end!
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
The only problem is as soon as I rest I'm liable to slip right back into lurker mode and you might not hear from me for months...I wanna try and get a couple more stories out before that inevitably happens.
Posted by zargein 8 months ago Report
It's nice to see a glimps of humanity.
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Judith is a rare kind of character in my stories I guess--someone with a strong sense of morals and justice. It really kind of shows how depraved the protagonists are that someone like her is basically the antagonist of the story.
Posted by anonymousCY 8 months ago Report
I think I have been obsessed with Amy, cannot wait for more story about her any more.
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
And here I was afraid I was writing about Amy too much! I've had to restrain myself lately because I thought she was kind of hogging the spotlight for such a minor character, but it's nice to know there are readers who enjoy her as much as I do.
My current favorite characters to write are Naomi and Leah, but Amy has definitely become my favorite of the preds.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 8 months ago Report
Darn it, you are firing these out quicker than I can get around to reading them :(( Just going to favourite all of them for now since I know they are solid gold anyway, and will comment whenever I find the time to actually read them as well! :D
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
Ha, I was so used to getting comments from you that I was actually starting to think you'd just gotten sick of my writing!
I'm sure it's kind of intimidating at this point, I'm slowly creating an insurmountable content wall for anyone who's not caught up... :P
Still I look forward to whenever you find the time, you always have such insightful and useful comments!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 8 months ago Report
On the contrary, I adore your writing and therefore can't just skim it, it's like a fine wine that needs an appropriate time and setting to enjoy.
But yeah, it's getting intimidating alright. Keep this up and you'll be up there with FrenchSnack. I think I am only lagging behind a couple of years on his writing now! :P
Posted by johnnyboy246 8 months ago Report
good read, liked how Becca acctually comforted nate. oh and while i've lost alot of hope and interest in nate and becca having a happy ending, cuz of the shit that's going to inevitably hit the fan, im super excited to see what you do with judith in future parts, and how what nate dose next. i mean she's already such and interesting character, and god damn i feel bad about what happended to her sister
lastly if nate dose acctually get caught id be nice to see becca go down with him xP, would definetly be fitting as becca probobly deverves it more XD. and also god damn id love to see june go down aswell >:)
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
It's funny, I wonder if most people would agree that Becca deserves it more...I think it's definitely up for debate who is worse. Sure Becca is the one who ultimately consumes the shrinkies, but she really only gets the chance because Nate goes out of his way to provide them to her.
Posted by johnnyboy246 8 months ago Report
haha yeah, i guess i think she's worse because the stuff she dose to leah which could easily be seen as worse than just eating her, aswell as how she seems just a bit more sociopathic than nate. but hey that's just my opinion ^w^
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 8 months ago Report
Fabulous work as always! It's so engaging to see all the familiar names and descriptions of the pred and prey of the past stories. I feel like June will still put up some fight before she actually goes down (or gets out of this situation, maybe?) so I look forward to seeing how things go from here!
Posted by TinyHunter 8 months ago Report
It was definitely fun after 15 chapters to finally have enough "history" that a character could pick through it like this and construct a timeline.
Not something I ever thought would happen when I originally wrote chapter 1 as a standalone story!
Posted by AnAccount 6 months ago Report
Lets go Judith! I wanna see Becca and June go downnnn. Realistically though Nate can use his connection to the shrinky cartel to get himself and maybe June out of this, since if he flips on June he's kinda screwed anyways. Probably same situation with Amber, the both of them are unlikely to let Nate just throw them under the bus. Consequences are happening! I really wanna know more about this egirl too...
Posted by AnAccount 6 months ago Report
Honestly I am so glad to be caught up again. Even if I dont have on demand new Tiny Hunter stories. You went on a hot streak! This chapter made me wanna reread the one with the teacher.
Posted by IvanHe 5 months ago Report
Loving the series hope to see more in the future