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Beloved popstar, Hanako Lee wraps up the last of her charity concerts for the shrinkee disease. Which ends up catching the attention of two teenage girls.
Introverted shut-in Bonnie, the pop star's biggest fan. And the extroverted rich girl, Serena, who goes with her dear friend in hopes that the concert will allow for her socially inept best friend to break out of her shell.
The three might just find their fates intertwined. With a night that’ll leave a permanent impact on many.
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HUGEST warning if you are privy to sensitivity at all with unforgiving cruelty in stories. Do not take that warning lightly. This is intentionally very twisted.
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32k words
Poll If I ever decide to revisit these characters. Which if I do, won’t be for a longgg time: https://strawpoll.com/e6Z2Ap48qgN
Spoilers somewhat, but this’ll probably be my last primarily unaware story for a while. I enjoy my patronizing dialogue too much..
No, it will not take a year and four days for my next story.
And yes, I give up on trying to give estimations for my stories.
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Posted by Kasra 6 months ago Report
Lovely descriptions, great setup, wonderful work!
Posted by EmpressKora 6 months ago Report
I’m glad you liked it! Thank you!!
Posted by iliketoread 6 months ago Report
Loved it! Props for writing a staggering 32k words, and like the previous comment mentioned, it does help create a good setup. I enjoyed both Serena and Bonnie as characters, would definitely welcome seeing them in the future if you ever decide to revisit them. The cruelty in the story was twisted in all the right ways. I can also say the snot part was interesting... never read anything like it lol. I would hate to be that shrinkee. Also my vote is totally for the unaware Serena story.
Cheers!
Posted by EmpressKora 6 months ago Report
Yeah the 32k words were not easy.. Especially considering I had to ask myself throughout how long of a story people are willing to sit through before the Big Bang. Seeing your longer stories definitely helped ease my mind on that actually. I had a way I wanted to setup things before the ending, I wouldn't have compromised that. So I’m glad people liked the setup.
It’s good you liked them! I was quite satisfied with how I did them and ended up liking them a lot throughout the story. Bonnie was so annoying to write.. I’d have to give the lines from her and about her some socially awkwardness in it, but not enough to where I’d hate it and delete the dialogue (a lot of lines did not make it LOL). Also yeah, that scene is certainly not for everybody, but I’m simultaneously pretty satisfied it got that reaction from you.
I was thinking for a bit this actually wouldn’t be for a lot of people because of how twisted I made it, and I was okay with that. I truly underestimated everyone though, I’m glad it found its way to the right people. I didn’t wanna accidentally scar any sensitive readers, hence the warnings.
I far prefer doing the Serena story way above anything else too. But I wanted to give people an option just in case. Serena is certainly winning which I’ll be glad about if I ever come back around to this. She was the character I had the most fun writing and I think I gave her the best concept for a story.
Thank you for commenting I love hearing all the input! Good luck on your writings too whenever they may be.
Posted by AllieNoms 6 months ago Report
This was a great story. The random unaware moments with other shrinkees was cute!
Posted by EmpressKora 6 months ago Report
I’m happy you liked them and the story! Thank you for the feedback!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 6 months ago Report
Poor Hanako. Graphic digestion in this work is absolutely fantastic!!! Great job with your descriptions for this story. Being digested by your fan while hearing your own hit-songs… now that’s some level of cruelty. Mad respect to that! I love your giantess vore/scat stories so much. Hope to see more like this! F/F and unaware rock also!
Posted by EmpressKora 6 months ago Report
Thank you!! I’m glad you liked the descriptions, I really liked that line about the songs while being digested so it’s good you did as well. Also I much prefer doing f/f when given the choice, so there will be a fair bit of that in my future stories.
Thank you for the commenting, your support for my writing is appreciated!