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Dana's little sister asks for her help with raising funds for the Girl Scouts. Dana would always be willing to buy some cookies of course, but it looks like the scouts aren't selling cookies this time...and the younger girl doesn't really want Dana to BUY anything exactly...
WooHoo! This was actually something I got really into writing (so much so that it turned out pretty long before I realized :P ).
I feel like I was able to put a lot of what I've learned about writing into this too, so I should hope that things like pacing, formatting and other stuff came out better than my earlier writing entries. Hooray for Progress!
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Posted by RakuRaku7 4 months ago Report
This was excellent! I loved them going door to door to sell themselves; even if they were reluctant, I'm glad they enjoyed themselves in the end.
Posted by TJMaximus 4 months ago Report
Thank you for the high praise! I was especially proud of this one, so I'm glad to see it well received.
Funny enough, the door to door aspect was the initial seed of an idea that came to me before I fully fleshed it all out.
Posted by Bakedone 4 months ago Report
Seriously this is one of if not the hottest story I have ever read on this site.
Posted by TJMaximus 4 months ago Report
I really did put a lot of effort and thought into it, so I'm glad to see it was worth it.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 4 months ago Report
Excellent from start to finish. A very well written story.
Posted by TJMaximus 4 months ago Report
Thank you! That's quite good to hear.
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 months ago Report
Great story, very nice atmosphere.
And mother and daughter getting to be butchered together, giving each moral support.
Posted by TJMaximus 3 months ago Report
Thanks! The Scouts and the slaughterhouse certainly did their best to accommodate volunteer family members. :)
Posted by TheNightMan85 6 days ago Report
Great story, was a solid read from beginning to end.