I quite like this comic! Seeing things go wrong simply because they did is something I'd love to see more of in porn writing.
Its for that reason, Id like to give you a quick warning. When writing a vore story that has actual characters and a "bad ending" (i dont agree with this term, but it gets the point across) a bunch of softies will crawl out of the woodwork begging for a "happy" ending for some reason. I don't know what mechanism causes this, because the porn is NOT MADE FOR THEM, so they should stfu and find their own stuff.
Just know that the silent majority enjoy stories with stakes, and meaning. The loud minority will beg you to make a boring story with a boring ending. Speaking from experience.
So thanks for writing what resonates with you! Its the best way to connect to likeminded folk. Like me ^^
Posted by Rubiont-47 4 months ago Report
Am I could even hope for a safe vore ending, knowing your preferences? >_<
Posted by nioto 4 months ago Report
Agreed
Posted by nioto 4 months ago Report
I really like these two characters, would be really nice to see a safe ending!
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
I believe impactful storytelling requires stakes; a sense of meaningful loss.
That being said, with so many people interested in a non-fatal ending, I'll consider it.
Posted by vorefanatic314 4 months ago Report
Couldn't of said it better, it's the original ending for me!
Posted by nioto 4 months ago Report
I think having an alternative ending would be best.
Posted by SamytheDragon 4 months ago Report
What a beautyful body she has and a nice face.
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
She's a hottie and she knows it.
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 4 months ago Report
Wonder how long she's waited to feel Amy slide down her throat
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
Not very long, she hasn't really considered eating Amy before tonight. But it's a special kinda high for her, as we'll soon see.
Posted by Belloc 4 months ago Report
That second pose is especially gorgeous
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you like Sheila's look
Posted by Chuba 4 months ago Report
Heck yea!~
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
Someday I'll finish this comic. Again. Haha
Posted by Kasra 4 months ago Report
Oh we are BACK, and she finally gets her two-for-one.
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
She's been waiting a while
Posted by 1ring42 4 months ago Report
Right where they belong
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
You said it!
Posted by 1ring42 4 months ago Report
So jealous
Posted by TETRO 4 months ago Report
I love how she poses as if displaying the body they'll be passing all the way through
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
She looks beautiful from many angles if you ask me
Posted by vorefanatic314 4 months ago Report
This is beautiful and I couldn't be happier seeing this continue!
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
I'm so glad. n n
Posted by vorefanatic314 3 months ago Report
Haha me too! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving by the way!
Posted by Kronguss 4 months ago Report
I quite like this comic! Seeing things go wrong simply because they did is something I'd love to see more of in porn writing.
Its for that reason, Id like to give you a quick warning. When writing a vore story that has actual characters and a "bad ending" (i dont agree with this term, but it gets the point across) a bunch of softies will crawl out of the woodwork begging for a "happy" ending for some reason. I don't know what mechanism causes this, because the porn is NOT MADE FOR THEM, so they should stfu and find their own stuff.
Just know that the silent majority enjoy stories with stakes, and meaning. The loud minority will beg you to make a boring story with a boring ending. Speaking from experience.
So thanks for writing what resonates with you! Its the best way to connect to likeminded folk. Like me ^^
Posted by Lucky 4 months ago Report
I'm glad you like it!
I am of the same mind as you; good stories have stakes, so there must be meaningful loss, or at least the potential for it.
Thanks for taking the time to share your experience with me, Kronguss.