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A writing collaboration between myself and TW. Enjoy!
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Posted by Daemonfall 17 years ago Report
Good story, short and choppy. I like this Grab&Gulp style, and would like to see some more of it. As for a distinct break? I haven't looked much for it. Maybe in another shot at the story...
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Posted by Daemonfall 17 years ago Report
Good story, short and choppy. I like this Grab&Gulp style, and would like to see some more of it. As for a distinct break? I haven't looked much for it. Maybe in another shot at the story...