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A young woman, Yvonne, came into a bondage submission relationship as a budding bondage sub with no real world experience. A lesbian domme takes her under her wing. Their relationship has grown for months and gone from only bondage to bondage with sex and then her domme, Jana, revealed to Yvonne that Jana could in fact envelop her and offer her bondage on a personal level Yvonne had never considered possible. Tonight they are to take it to "the next level": Jana is going to envelop and merge with Yvonne, taking her to the final level of total submission.
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Posted by Firstfate 13 years ago Report
(shudders) This is something else :D
Kind of reminds of how my own character 'bonds' with her mates, only instead of absorbing them, The Mother keeps her mates for eternity. Even if they sometimes 'leave' her home, she is always quick to reclaim them from where they are reborn :)
I hope you will go on and continue this story ^^
Posted by Selpathor 13 years ago Report
I'm a little confused at the ending.
Did Minx take control of Yvonne temporarily? Or something like that?
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
I knew I Should have ended with Yvonne jerking awake in bed the next night with a wonderful afterglow still going on. >_> Yes, Minx took control temporarily. It seems THAT needs some editing.
Posted by Selpathor 13 years ago Report
That would be a very good ending to clear up any confusion like I had.
Posted by haloronin 12 years ago Report
Well, i have to admit,, this is about right, it's always been about the butteyrflys in your stomach,, theres jsut no way to explain it better. when your new in to the bdsm comunity,, you have to walk on egg shells, cause you dont know what kind of impression your giving off, and to whom have thier eyes on you, I'll admit, i was kinda hoping ot read about her experience in subspace, form the yearlong relationship they've had, E. woudl have perobabaly hit it once or twice, and i woudl also have liked to hear more about the subcrash afterwards, though its pretty much up to the people in teh relationship as to how, strick or relaxed thigns are, i find this is an excelent view of a single particular relationship, i'd love to see more as you work on them imrhys.
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you and in the rewrite there will be more of the climax and total submission by Yvonne. I actually would like to write beyond this mere short story on these two, but my direct experience with being dom/sub is limited only to what I have read so...
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Somehow six months ago I missed your comments about subspace, but after reading two different comics by BDSM lovers and subspace and finding some people to ask about it, yes, I will need to edit this OR include something on subspace later. Mind you, Minx is not an S&M'ish, but a bondage, sub/dom sort, since her unique anatomy allows her to do things here that S&M just can't touch.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
wow! extremely well written and extremely intsne! Although I never understood it before, this story gave me a good idea of the concept of "poly love" // 'server/client' relationships. very interesting--and the sex scenes, of course, are just heavenly :D I love this story!
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Thank you. Though I am unsure what you mean by "poly love", since I don't remember poly-amorous in here. Though it is referenced as how Minx tends to feed, it is never explicitly seen. And what do you mean by server/client relationships?