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A quick almost-story I wrote for a close friend that puts the reader in the position of a helpless human prey, carried off to a mountaintop-nest by a ravenous gryphon!
Not up to the usual length or depth of my typical stories, but hey, figured I'd try something new, and hopefully people enjoy it ^^
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Posted by Makuta 11 years ago Report
Awesome Pov story :)
Posted by Vidofinir 11 years ago Report
Thanks! It's a strange perspective to write, so I'm glad it worked well.
Posted by Eolwin 11 years ago Report
That's probably the best POV I've seen in a while~
And the writing, like for your other stories, makes it very enjoyable ^^ I hope you'll do some more like this from time to time.
Posted by Vidofinir 11 years ago Report
I'd be happy to write one for you when the mood strikes! ^^
Posted by sharky 11 years ago Report
Great story ! It has all of my fav aspects of vore all rolled up into one fun package.
Posted by Vidofinir 11 years ago Report
Glad to hear it! ^^
Posted by silverspec 11 years ago Report
I wish I could critique it, but I can't. This story is good. Of course, its material caters to my interests, so perhaps i'm biased. Anyway, good read.
Posted by kounaloulaoup 10 years ago Report
really great story, what if you did it with a snake or a wolf ?
i sure ad it to fav ^^
Posted by Vidofinir 10 years ago Report
That's not a bad idea. I'd been wanting to write something more involving wolves, and a friend got me into the idea of snake preds as well...
Mind you, I think I have too many stories in mind to work on already, but I'll keep it in mind~ And glad you liked this one ^^
Posted by Speedyblupi 9 years ago Report
I don't usually read 2nd person stories. Maybe I should start doing so more often.
Posted by Dragonclaw 9 years ago Report
Oh, this one was very good. I really liked it. A stomach is not a comfortable place. You found a good way to describe it.
Nice work. I like the gryphon.
Posted by Vidofinir 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked! Gryphons are my favorite preds~
Posted by Dragonclaw 9 years ago Report
you are welcome :3
Ah I see. I like birds-of-prey and gryphons very much as Preds. :3 (Snakes are great, too. Or Dragons)
Posted by Vidofinir 9 years ago Report
I like anything with wings pretty much, though gryphons tend to top that list regardless of mood. Anything with a proper gizzard to mulch up prey certainly gets my attention though X3
Posted by Dragonclaw 9 years ago Report
great. Perhaps we two will come together to for a Commission later :3