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Princess Luna, struggling to stave off the lasting influence of Nightmare Moon, attempts to sate her desire for dominion over Canterlot by feasting on a helpless servant-pony.
(Finally some MLP vore from me! This one might get a sequel eventually, but for now, consider it a standalone piece!)
I dedicate this story to TrixietheVoracious, for making me quite obsessed with the idea of Princess Luna nomming ponies!
Oh yeah, ponies belong to Hasbro and stuff. Don't sue me, Hasbro!
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Posted by silverspec 10 years ago Report
What a beautifully written story. Ah!
Posted by Vidofinir 10 years ago Report
Thanks! ^^
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 10 years ago Report
Awesome story!
Posted by Vidofinir 10 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Bliss 10 years ago Report
Oh my, yes. I'm not a fan of the extended digestion/scat, but the rest of it was lovely! I hope you continue with more mlp related vore!
Posted by Vidofinir 10 years ago Report
Heh, those are my favorite parts, but hey, glad you enjoyed the rest of it! I'll be hoping to have more MLP stuff up here sooner or later ^^
Posted by InvalidResponse 10 years ago Report
This was awesome! I've been wanting to see some stories from you with female predators.
Posted by Vidofinir 10 years ago Report
I intend to have more like this soon - something involving Trixie is in the works now, but it could be awhile before that sees completion.
In any case, thank you!
Posted by Eolwin 10 years ago Report
I couldn't really comment it directly after I read it, because I was way too tired, but this is again another story to add to your awesome ones ^^
I hope you'll write more sexy things~
And poor Moonlight... Or lucky him? I don't know ^^
Posted by mallowsal 10 years ago Report
Would be neat if there was a sequel where the souls of those she consumes stay within her mind, the more she eats, the more she has to fight the evil within XDXD
Posted by Vidofinir 10 years ago Report
I was certainly considering more of this, but along the lines of 'Luna eating Celestia'.
I figure the more she eats, the darker her mind will be, and the less it'll bother her. But time (and the possible sequel) will tell! ^^
Posted by mallowsal 10 years ago Report
cool! oh and a shameless plug, if you want you can use my two headed changeling if you need a weird pred XDXD
Posted by Speedyblupi 9 years ago Report
Not bad, but the tense keeps on changing mid-sentence, which is quite offputting.
Posted by thirdspurs 9 years ago Report
Tis a shame that a sequal never managed to matierialize. Still I very much enjoy this story and keep coming back to it.
Posted by Vidofinir 9 years ago Report
Oh~? I should bump the vague notion of a sequel a little higher on my list of things to do, since there's some interest! ^^
Thanks for the comment, glad you like it! <3
Posted by thirdspurs 9 years ago Report
Oooh that would be pretty neat~