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In response to "A case of mistaken identies between a cosplayer and a demoness leads to two interesting Halloween parties.":
Isabel and Satumiel both have Halloween parties to go to. They somehow manage to go to the wrong ones.
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Happy Halloween, everyone! This was going to just be a regular snippet, but it grew into this monstrosity. Halloween is my favorite holiday, so I wanted to give it some proper vorish love. I think it came out well, though. A double vore feature! Thanks to Bright for the prompt!
NaNoVoreMo begins tomorrow, and I'm pretty excited about what I have planned, so here's one final hurrah for the snippet system before I buckle down and start writing on that. If you're curious, you'll be able to find my progress posted on my snippet blog every day at 5 PM, over at http://snippets.deliciousreya.net on the tumblrs!
Posted by Bright 9 years ago Report
A good story I say.
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Posted by DeliciousReya 9 years ago Report
Thank you kindly! :D I was pretty pleased with it. It was an excellent prompt!
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Posted by DeliciousReya 9 years ago Report
Don't worry, I'm sure it did continue off camera! :D
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Posted by BardicLasher 9 years ago Report
Great story! I love demonesses.
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Posted by DeliciousReya 9 years ago Report
They're pretty great, I gotta say :D Thank you for the kind words!
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Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
Very nice indeed! The webs of mistaken identities and friendly lies (for instance when Ester and Satumiel are trying to persuade each other without feeling able to tell the truth) was both amusing and suspenseful.
I liked the preys' perspective of it actually being enjoyable inside the stomach. Satumiel's food talking to her dreamily from inside her tummy while she was hurrying anxiously to avoid pursuit was a good touch. Interesting, too, to make the demons *vulnerable*, and rather nice.
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Posted by DeliciousReya 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much! :D I'm really fond of that sort of web of dramatic irony as long as it's done well. The suggestion was just such a fantastic idea, I'm glad I was able to deliver on it properly.
Demons are just people, yo. Human-eating, horned, winged people with scary ideas of fun games. But, you know, people still. :D
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