Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report

my only gripe is that it's not as long as the first one :) a very touching story

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

Heh, thanks! This one's shorter mostly because it didn't take as much setup, since I established Tricia's abilities in the earlier one.

Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report

Quite enjoysble~

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report

I totally love it! Just wow! Right down to the playful power balance between them, and the prey and pred both taking enjoyment from, hypothetically, the possibility of permanence. But at a playful and definitely probably safe level. Emily and Cody are good people. If I were a pred and had such prey, I would count myself very lucky.

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

Thanks! I had fun with that, and I figured that if I was going to establish that Cody and Emily had been happily married for a while, I'd have to show that they had acquired some level of agency in the relationship. And I just love the idea of the pred finding that her prey's somehow managed to take control of the situation on occasion.

And while I'm not sure I'll write more about Tricia, as far as I'm concerned, the four of them (and any other partners they pick up over the years) grow happily old together, and when failing health finally catches up to each of her partners, they just stop coming out of Tricia's cleavage space. Eventually Tricia is left to become the darling of her nursing home, where the staff wonder about her refusal to wear a bra, and why she always talks about her exes as though they're still alive and with her. And sometimes the night nurses swear that it sounds like she has company in there, though they never see anyone when they check on her.

Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report

a thought occurs to me: what's Tricia's cup size? for some reason i imagine her being relatively small (contrast the extremely large bust sizes of both Reina and Mitsuki in my own submissions)

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

If you follow the link to ShadesofBlack's manips that inspired this, I'm using that image as Tricia's canonical appearance. Looking at it, I'd guess her to be around a 38C-38D cup, based entirely on the fact that the model looks approximately as busty as my wife.

If it weren't for that photo reference, I'd have modeled Tricia off a friend of mine who would occasionally lift her breasts onto the table top and use them as a pillow to take a nap, because the idea of Tricia sticking her face into her own cleavage space to say hi to her occupants is rather fun.