This is a fantastic first submission. The first of many, many more I hope! I love the text, I know it's just simple fount, but it works so much better then hand written I think, and solid word balloons.
There are some problems, First is proportions, She looks much smaller at the top (chest upwards) then at the bottom. Throws it off a bit. I think the stomach could use work, it be a lot better if the bottom went back into her side area, then ending into her thigh. Her spine is doing some insane bending too. Her chest upwards says she's standing straight up, while her waist and lets say she's bending over. It's a hard pose to do so it could use work.
Thank you for the feedback! After reading it I noticed a few of my drawings (Work in progress drawings) have the same problems. I guess it's kind of part of my style for now until I managed to get around it. :P
lol, key thing to note: if it's not something you meant to do, it's not your style. But a mistake. But now that you notice you can fix it going forward. such is the way of the artist, and their craft.
I'm really hyped to see those WIPs, man, I need more good vore art in my life!
Nice really nice I have always had a major crush on Nani and by the way can you tell me who the other dancer was and is there a chance that you are going to do a vore artwork based on Moana ?
Posted by Delete34nsf8s 8 years ago Report
Love it! Nani is one of my favourie preds, great job!
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
I agree and Thanks!
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
Thank you for the comment! I see now that her left arm is a bit off. Too thin among some other things. Feedback is always welcome!
Posted by spectral knight 8 years ago Report
it looks great, really like her expression
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Furanz 8 years ago Report
Yooo this is amazing! Love her awkward smile while still shaking them hips. This is great, dude!
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
Thanks a lot!
Posted by CMvoreroom 8 years ago Report
Very well done with this piece, great job.
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
Thanks! =)
Posted by Vdiem 8 years ago Report
This is a fantastic first submission. The first of many, many more I hope! I love the text, I know it's just simple fount, but it works so much better then hand written I think, and solid word balloons.
There are some problems, First is proportions, She looks much smaller at the top (chest upwards) then at the bottom. Throws it off a bit. I think the stomach could use work, it be a lot better if the bottom went back into her side area, then ending into her thigh. Her spine is doing some insane bending too. Her chest upwards says she's standing straight up, while her waist and lets say she's bending over. It's a hard pose to do so it could use work.
I still love this, it's a great piece of work!
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
Thank you for the feedback! After reading it I noticed a few of my drawings (Work in progress drawings) have the same problems. I guess it's kind of part of my style for now until I managed to get around it. :P
Posted by Vdiem 8 years ago Report
lol, key thing to note: if it's not something you meant to do, it's not your style. But a mistake. But now that you notice you can fix it going forward. such is the way of the artist, and their craft.
I'm really hyped to see those WIPs, man, I need more good vore art in my life!
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
Good point.
Posted by Vdiem 8 years ago Report
Glad you got it, with out me comming off as a prick.
Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 8 years ago Report
Nice really nice I have always had a major crush on Nani and by the way can you tell me who the other dancer was and is there a chance that you are going to do a vore artwork based on Moana ?
Posted by Ergos 8 years ago Report
I guess it's more up to the view to think of who Nani ate. I might try to do Moana some day.
Posted by Wolfknight130 7 years ago Report
there isn't enough Nani vore on the internet =(
Posted by VorePhiliaGirl 7 years ago Report
What She Ate? :o