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Sleepover time! I love sleepovers in vore stories, though this one doesn't exactly follow the pattern that I usually like them to take. Still a ton of vore though! This was kind of supposed to be the finale after all, but after making this public the various comments I've received have helped me to tweak ideas that I'd had but didn't know how to implement into stories that I could actually use. You're making a difference people! Thank you so much!
Also, is there any discernible difference between the million and one F/multiprey tags? (F/FM, F/MF, F/FFM, F/FMF, F/MFMMFFFFFMM, etc.) Is it the order they're eaten in or something? Not sure if this is a serious question or just something I noticed about the tag system and wanted to point out how humorous I found it.
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Posted by Sharktooth 7 years ago Report
Ill explain the / tags
For example
If a guy ate a girl who ate a girl
M/f/f
Pred comes first. Then it depends on how many stomachs your In lol that's the order
A girl eats a dude and a girl
F/mf or f/fm doesn't truely mater there
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
Good to know the order of eaten prey doesn't matter unless multiple predators are involved. Guess I'll just have to pick a way of tagging single predator/multigender+multiprey and stick with it.
Posted by Sharktooth 7 years ago Report
Well its just who's pred/prey and do that you'll be fine for the most part
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
Nice to see Julia's friends are nice.
Hopefully one of them doesn't get hungry during the night
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
I also had a small idea if your interested.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
If you'd like you can put it in a comment or PM me. I interrupt my writing to do lists so often I can at least give your idea a look. On another note...
Sleepover guests/hosts getting hungry during the night is more or less the direction I DO like sleepover stories to take. Michelle is safe though, don't you worry.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
Okay.
Still a nice chapter
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
What a heated chapter. Lots of passionate, tender, willing vore. And one bummer first time story. :/
If you're continuing this story are we going to see more Tina and Karen?
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
Hey, I have to at least pretend I've given my characters some backstory, right? What's a backstory without tragedy?
And at the moment I have no further plans for Karen or Tina. They're very one off characters that I believe I introduced simply to show that Julia had friends and then I got the idea for this chapter and they suddenly became very fortuitous.
Posted by DrakentheBlack 7 years ago Report
Interesting idea to have first swallow and last swallow preds. I guess I'm more of a last swallow pred myself.
Still loving the story, but the ending makes me both look forward to and dread reading the next chapter.
Posted by Apex 7 years ago Report
You know, I'm not really sure where the first/last swallow idea came from. I think for some reason those are just always the two parts I end up focusing on when I write descriptions so it just came up naturally? At any rate, glad you enjoyed it.