Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report

Ooh, very nice! Whatever the rental cost, I suspect they both already consider it well worth the money. :) I like the dominant tone, it certainly makes for something different than your usual.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Sometimes I just need to take things in another tonal direction. Glad it was enjoyable!

Posted by ShadesofBlack 7 years ago Report

Oh my god. I'm shivering after reading this. I now know what I want from my wife for my birthday.

SPOILER
The blend of vore, compression, and effectively clothing tf at the end was thrilling!

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you enjoyed it!

Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report

Ooh... I really liked the ending. O////O <3

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report

Not enough good objectification out there.

Posted by dreamweevil 7 years ago Report

Very, very cool and unique concept. The writing gave us just the right sense of how this HDTF works: that the hubby becomes compressible and flexible and springy/squishy, and how it immediately uncorks his wife's fantasies. Really fun story.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks! The HDTF shows up in a lot of my stuff, and I usually try to make sure people don't have to have read all of the rest to get the idea.

Posted by squashflat 7 years ago Report

now this is different and very very erotic, i love it, thank you.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Posted by squashflat 7 years ago Report

I am a little confused, but otherwise the story is wonderful and playful. my confusion is did he Buy the HDTF or Rent it, because he says its a "rental page" but he later says "He bought it"
thats all my confusion is.
please tell us more of the weekend.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

I write these things late at night while bleary-eyed and drowsy, so mistakes happen. It was a rental.

Posted by Pokeman 4 years ago Report

I was re reading a bunch of your HDTF stuff today, and I had an interesting thought.
So, the MaxiChem isotopes can mimic any HDTF effect, presumably including the magic knife, which was described as forcing some of the mass entirely into the fourth dimension. What would happen if you used the MaxiChem isotope for this? Presumably, as single spritz of the other isotopes effects the whole body, the victim would disappear entirely. Thinking about it, though, the established in world tools show a decent solution for this. Since the restoration chamber is described as canceling out the wave forms of the HDTF, it should be able to restore the person if you put the faraday cage around the point where they vanished, and the effect would be canceled, causing the person to explode back into three dimensions, the only problem with this being that you would have to track down their vanishing point. As they had no mass, what would happen to the HDTF field of their vanishing point? I doubt it would travel with the planet, but would it still be effected by gravity, and therefore fall to the center of the planet, or would it move with constant velocity, slowly moving away from the earth at the earth orbits the sun, and the sun orbits the center of the galaxy? Or would it just disperse in all directions at the speed of light, leaving no time to fix the person?
Could be in interesting weaponization in something similar to the hostile takeover story ark, although it would likely go nuclear too fast to provide good story, especially seeing as MaxiMhem also managed to make the HDTF effect anything. You could vanish the planet with enough isotope.

I love how you keep your worlds so simultaneously consistent and sexy that you can get horny from it one minute, then theorize about the worlds physics the next.

Posted by Pokeman 4 years ago Report

This applies to most of your stories, just the HDTF has lots of content and lots of potential for theorizing about.