Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report

Awesome story ^^ well done with this and I hope we'll some more dino vore soon, either from you or from me! :p

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

I might do some more dino vore. Might. I've got other projects to be working on, which you might see soon. I've got a frog vore story for a friend, a dragon vore story, and some others.

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report

What a wonderful story about three stupid girls getting exactly what they deserve~

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Why thank you! I am a fan of prey that sorta deserve what they get, you know?

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report

And I'm a fan of pretty girls getting painfully digested alive :p

Posted by Deleteduser89324b 6 years ago Report

Nice work, do you take requests?

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Usually, but I'm full up on writing projects right now. You can still send your idea over to me if you want though!

Posted by TETRO 6 years ago Report

That was pretty damn good! I especially liked the word choices when referencing disposal.

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Thank you! Where there any words in particular you really liked?

Posted by TETRO 6 years ago Report

Well it's not really the words themselves but how they were used, I suppose. For example, you used some good innuendo, as when one character referring to another as a "piece of shit" unaware that she was literally on her way to becoming one.

The little quip about them becoming part of the island as fertilizer was pretty nice, and I liked the mention of how the first girl was already gone by the time the third one was eaten.

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Ah, thank you. I like doing stuff like that, statements that are funny only because we, the audience, know something the characters don't.
And yeah, as for them being fertiliser, it just felt right to me you know? A: It meant they were giving back to the island they were trying to pillage from, and B: it really honed in how far they had fallen. That before, they were living, breathing people, and now they were just literal plant food.

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it so much, it means something coming from you. And yeah, they weren't that well prepared at all, just a whole lot of little messups that cascade into one, massive mistake.
Although, considering the size of the beast and the ineffectiveness of their rifles, I think sticking together would just mean the dino would get its meals faster!

And yes, I do like what you like too in regards to strong and confident characters, especially when they deserve exactly what they got.

Posted by Vitcent 6 years ago Report

Goshgosh, this is good writing about girls versus a rex gut >:3c

While I certainly don't envy that painful start of their journey through its gut... eheh, its a tempting offer reading about being churned into just another pile of leftovers for a t-rex~ >w>;

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Yeah, I might've gone a bit overboard with the pain thing. A better idea would probably be a slow, bubbling oozification, aided by the lack of air inside the gut. It would feel like being melted into molten butter.

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Wait, I forgot to say thank you for liking it! I feel honoured, knowing that the great Vitcent thinks my writing is good! Thank you!

Posted by violetrose39 6 years ago Report

I’m so fucking wet haha dibs on being its next meal

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

I don't think you get to choose. The jungle's tyrants hunts what it wishes to hunt. You do not decide whether you live or die, it does.

But running at it covered in barbeque sauce would probably speed things along. Possibly. Do dinosaurs even like barbeque sauce?

Posted by violetrose39 6 years ago Report

Hehe maybe

Do you rp at all?

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

I do...

Posted by violetrose39 6 years ago Report

Can I pm you ?

Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report

Sure, you don't need to ask.

Posted by DigestedGirl 10 months ago Report

Well, to be honest. I know this getting old but, yeah I kinda like two blonde girls, Carla and Kylie, even i wanna see their faces

Posted by DigestedGirl 9 months ago Report

well, i don't know how to say since the last message message, but i want to say that Carla got nommed and that she masturbated were the moment i have cummed many times because she was such a hot blonde english

Posted by DigestedGirl 9 months ago Report

well honestly i'm start to thinking this "carla" you have made it 6 years ago was based on cara delevingne

Posted by VividLucidity 9 months ago Report

I don't think that's the case, as I don't really know who that is. Besides, I doubt I put that much thought into the character. I wrote this story in about one weekend because I was annoyed how little good dinosaur vore stories were there. So Carla was just a female prey and not much more to be honest.

Posted by DigestedGirl 9 months ago Report

still carla was a decent dinosaur food

Posted by SuperFkingCala 4 months ago Report

i wish i want to have catla as my bitch

Posted by SuperFkingCala 4 months ago Report

*carla, because she's simply british

Posted by SuperFkingCala 4 months ago Report

i wish to want to masturbate and cum onto kylie and carla so hard

Posted by DigestedGirl 4 months ago Report

hot blonde girls always deliciously dinofood~~