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A short commission for DesiArcy
Shanice has always dreamed of being food, and her part-time job helping to feed a bio-engineered dinosaur has fueled her fantasies. Now at 18 she's volunteered to take part in the primary test of his training.
Check the tags, there's some content in this one beyond what's usually seen from me.
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Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report
I really liked this story! It's nice to see some more "normal" dinosaur vore, a good old dinosaur gobbling up a good old human! You had good descriptions, writing, flow, it was all good! You could use a bit of work in detailing Goliath himself though and what he was doing while eating her, helping us get a better feel for it all, but it was all still great!
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Posted by the_Wolf 6 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed this so much! And yes, I can hear some of the details on that. Some things had to be slightly trim for the length of commission, though I'll have to include those details in anything freeform. Appreciate the commentary.
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Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report
Oh yeah, it was a commission. I should've picked up on that. Thank you.
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Posted by GilPix 6 years ago Report
What a wonderful experiment they put together. It's going to be the top item on every 3rd world power's wish list, maybe even Trump's.
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Posted by the_Wolf 6 years ago Report
It's the wish-list item of every tyrannical despot, to be sure.
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Posted by Bobrocks 6 years ago Report
How much are they?
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