Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report

Thanks again for writing this. Love the story. Glad I was able to provide a script you liked.

Btw, all the art on my gallery is commissions, requests, and gifts. I didnt draw any of it. Just pointing that out as it wasnt clear from your description.
Anyway, we indeed have quite overlapping tastes.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Oh no need for thanks, I loved writing it~

Oh oops sorry, I forgot it was commissioned work in your gallery. Either way though, your gallery is well worth folk checking out~

Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report

A very well written story.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Thank you very much! If you have any particular elements you'd like to see more of, I'm always happy to hear about it. No pressure though <3

Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report

I really like the drunken dare part of it, I also like how the predator gets away with it by blaming the dog, hehe.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Ah yeah I had a lot of fun writing that bit~ The poor little doggy. The initial draft had Astrid mention "not again" regarding the dog, as perhaps she'd eaten earlier boyfriends, but it ended up being edited out.

Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report

The drunken dare was kinda how my idea came to be. Wanted them to drunkenly nom him and then have forgotten all about it the next day. It then developed from that.

Posted by Eclipseneko51 5 years ago Report

I really enjoyed that, i really like how anna suggested she'd show Astrid she could deep throat better by using Albert as an example and how she accidentally swallowed him due to Astrid hugging her and slapping her on the ass. I also like how anna and Astrid had a lot of lesbian interactions with each other especially while Albert was digesting in Anna's stomach which also caused them to completely forget about him until it was already to late to do anything.

Great work I'd love to see more of these two characters in the future.

(excuse my lack of grammar and sorry it took me so long to get to reading this I've had exams to deal with)

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Oh I can't take credit for the ass slap and lesbian activities, dcvfgb1234 specifically suggested that element. It's one of the things that got me so interested in writing his story suggestion~

As neither of them are intentional preds, I'm not sure if they'll turn up much again in future stories, but I might have them briefly mentioned at one of Stephanie's exclusive parties~

Oh no need to apologise, there's no rush to read or comment on any of this. I hope your exams go well.

Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report

I probably could come up with more scenarios where they could exist. XD
But yeah, they were chars I just pulled out of the air and not meant for much more.
Though I do like the idea BunnyWrites had about them going to one of the parties.

Posted by NewRebellion 5 years ago Report

Why, that B*TCH!

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

It'll be fine, there are plenty more tiny men where Albert came from <3

Posted by NewRebellion 5 years ago Report

I understand what you mean, but that's not the point.

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report

I agree, and that's why she's so hot!

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Haha yep, I love characters like that. <3

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report

Seems like it was totally the right idea to try to marry someone like Astrid! In my headcanon, that's not the first leftover engagement ring she got~

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

In the original draft, upon seeing the chewed clothing by her pet dog, she commented "not again!" Either because the dog had eaten previous boyfriends, or because she'd blamed the dog for it.

I think a fun prequel/sequel would be where she perhaps ate a boyfriend in her sleep, the two of them in bed, Astrid feeling hungry in her dream, and wanting to suck down a large meaty sausage. Then thinking the dog ate him in the morning.

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report

I would love to read that sequel. But what would Astrid do if she noticed his remains in her morning/afternoon/whenever shit? If that would happen, would she still pretend it was her cute little Fluffers? Like "Yep, that stinky waste is absolutely normal, I totally don't see an engagement ring in there, so let's see if... *flush* Yes, a perfectly healthy and normal dump. I would show it to my boyfriend to judge, but unfortunately Fluffers ate him tonight..." Ha, it might be out of character, but it was fun to imagine.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Haha that's true, the poop would be hard to explain. Personally, I'm not in the habit of looking at my poop, so if she followed suit it's likely she might not even notice. Just flush and be about her day. But yeah there are some fun scenarios.

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report

Hmh that's interesting. Do you model your preds after yourself?

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Sometimes. This story was a request I got so I don't really see myself as any of them. But Elly's inner thoughts match a lot of my own, even if I'd never actually do that IRL to a tiny friend...

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report

+1 to the "how many calories" line~

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

I love that line, so much so that I had a similar comment by Elly in one of my other stories as she enters Amy into her calorie counter app. It's so deliciously degrading, plus it adds a hint of "realness" to it in my mind.

Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report

That is a fun sequel/prequel idea. XD

Posted by EmmaTummy 11 months ago Report

God I want this to become a thing one day

Posted by nosuspicious 4 years ago Report

I revisited this classic today. The post-digestion stuff really makes the story for me. I remember being a little disappointed when Albert was swallowed by accident, but it was more than made up for when I read Anna's and Astrid's reactions to his demise.

I just adore how nonchalant they are about what happened to him. It's the reaction you'd expect if Fluffers accidentally killed one of her houseplants instead of a long-term boyfriend and ambitious law student.

The lines that really did it for me were Anna's degrading joke about Astrid's boyfriend becoming literal dog shit (knowing full well what really happened to him) and Astrid's hardly taking any offense to it at all. She just lightly chides her for teasing and then they forget all about him seconds later. It's such a hot way to add extra humiliation to a vore scenario. Absolutely perfect.

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

I think the only concern Astrid would have would be to whether her adorable pet Fluffers could pass his meal ok without a trip to the vet. Otherwise her priority is just remembering her password for her dating app~