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Happy Halloween, everyone!
In this spooky tale, a bevy of lovely, costume-clad women explore a haunted house attraction, and soon discover that when you're only a few inches tall, mundane things like grass snakes, fish and toads can be quite terrifying!
So here we go: Halloween 2021 time! This premise was actually intended for last you, but I just didn't have the motivation at the time to get it finished back then. On the up side, a whole year of extra development time ended up making it quite a lot more elaborate than the first draft was gonna be. At one point I intended to do several other 'rooms', but now I'm not sure if I'll revisit this or not. Have I already take this theme to its conclusion?
This was also a fun opportunity for me to use some 'classic' predators I rarely employ, like snakes, fish and toads. Lemme know how you like this, vs the weirder, more fantastical predators I usual have.
Anyway, have a happy Halloween, everyone, and try not to traipse around near suspicious Halloween attractions.
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Posted by Halodarkpd 3 years ago Report
Love it, especially how lara at the end getting nomed, so close to making it >:)
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I do like to keep a bit of uncertainty-tension until the very end . . . even though usually the outcome is the same. x3
Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report
Great and fantastic as always, you had a lot of sexy women in a perilous situation here, and I wonder what would have happened behind the other doors ; )
I especially enjoyed the snake at the start, I got a thing for those but I haven't seen much snake vore lately so this was welcome. The internal scenes were equally fantastic and enjoyed them in length^^
I guess it was the audience who ended up with a treat, this Halloween, while the participants were those who were tricked ;)
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
I did originally plan to have at least some of the other doors be stories of their own, but considering it took me a year to get this together, I'm not sure if I should commit to a direct sequel.
Snakes are such a classic, I have no idea why I don't feature them more often, really.
Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report
I think I quite like Evie! She has a cute nervous submissiveness towards her employer... combined with a delightful sense of fun in teasing the 'volunteers' and enjoying the show.
Girls stuffed tightly inside a snake is generally appealing, and particularly so here. “Mmmm! Mmgh! Mmm, mmmph!”: Candy seems to know what to say to sound sexy... :D
By the way: Cherry, Caramel... Have you been reading my IVC stories? Or have we simply come up with the same treat-related names for female characters? :p
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
I guess I couldn't resist using Evie to tie the whole thing into a few of my previous Halloween tales . . . and I just really like the 'teasing announcer' trope. xD
The names must be I coincidence I think . . . I suppose there are only so many really excellent treat-related names. x3
Posted by jimmypootron 3 years ago Report
So glad you finally got round to this! Absolutely loved it ❤️ I loved the fact that the whole thing was recorded too!
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
It was really a long time coming, but hopefully the wait was worth it in the end! I'm certainly happy with the final result, at least! :D
Posted by VividLucidity 3 years ago Report
That was quite the lovely story. I think that shrunken prey falling victim to regular animal predators and such is a rather underdone concept (it was even my first story on Eka's), so I appreciate seeing it done so well. I hope to see more of it from you, perhaps with different predators, different sizes (leading to even more different predators~), or perhaps the one behind the shrinking having a more 'active' role in ensuring the preds get their meals...
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! This was a pretty fun premise, so it's definitely possible I'll end up revisiting something similar in the future.
Posted by grz01 3 years ago Report
I so look forward to your stories, this one being no exception, love the inside belly descriptions.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
I definitely feel the same about the internal scenes! x3
Posted by longwayofftiff 3 years ago Report
Ha sorry I haven’t commented before now; I’ve read it a couple times actually. Always love the Halloween themed stories!! I like the recurring character Evie! I felt sorry for the rock climbing girl, Caramel, but we all know that while characters do get digested there does tend to be a lot of off-stage girl rescues as well. Who knows, she might find herself in just such a situation. Keep on writing and I’ll hopefully get enough to put another story of my own up soon.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I do love a good Halloween tale!
Hopefully I'll have the opportunity to showcase Evie and her highly unusual work situation at some point in the future.
Even though my free time is not nearly as generous as it once was, I'm not gonna stop writing anytime soon! And I definitely look forward to what you come up with next!
Posted by anais2000 3 years ago Report
Hmmm, another fun and delicious story from you. I'm quite undecided if I'd rather be eaten by the toad, on one hand a slower digestive system means more chances to be rescued, on the other it means, well... A slower digestion. XP
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks! :D
It's a tough call, but I say you'd wanna be optimistic and roll the dice on that excessively slow, gradual digestive system. More opportunity for rescue probably still outweighs the (high) chance of just ending up with more time languishing in digestion.
Not that I have a bias, or anything. xP
Posted by anais2000 3 years ago Report
Hmmm decisions decisions. Let's be optimistic, I'll be rescued, eventually. Right? Right?
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Totally . . . probably. I mean, there's only one way to find out, right? xD
Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report
This was very nice! I love stories of this theme that have multiple predators attacking multiple girls, all of whom are trying various means to survive.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
Yeah, this was a fun theme, with a nice variety of predators on display. Also got to use some predator type that a pretty rare for me.
Glad you liked!