Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Lmao , I love it. A monster looking for food not to scare kids

Posted by Ev0nix 3 years ago Report

Huh, creative.

Posted by Madock345 3 years ago Report

Stripping is out of line, but getting eaten is cool. I love settings like this lmao

Posted by ConservativeFox 3 years ago Report

Lol, wonder what Paulie thought of the event...

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

I keep coming back to this story. (Pun not intended) So many great little details... the bag of discarded clothes on the door handle, the carpet brushing Kodie's cock, the flattening of his body.

Posted by LucifersChef 3 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Posted by LucifersChef 3 years ago Report

I have to admit I was unhappy with this one and almost didn't post it, so that is really gratifying to hear

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

Sometimes I'll post a story that I think is absolutely amazing and the response to it is mostly indifferent and other times I'll post a story that I think is just alright and everyone is like 'OMG, that is the best story ever!!' and I never know why people reacted the way they did to either story. I think the moral of our stories is that writers really have no idea what they are doing.

Posted by LucifersChef 3 years ago Report

I definitely feel that. I've also noticed that sometimes a story with few views gets lots of comments and popular stories get no comments.

Posted by Mouthful 3 years ago Report

I've noticed the same thing, for sure!

Posted by rugli 1 year ago Report

I think this story is mostly fine, but it feels cut short as we don't know how Paulie will react once finding out that Kodie let the monster eat him.