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A peaceful lunch for a trainer and her pokemon is interrupted by an unwelcome guest who insists on battling them. No worries though, this cocky trainer is more than able to compensate for their missing meal.
A commission done for Brodusa featuring some lovely new OCs of mine. This was a fun one to write and I hope you all enjoy it as well!
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Posted by Pkmnguy6262 3 years ago Report
Wow this is amazing, so much there to love about this xd short smug predators devouring much larger prey, milotic prey which is one of my utter favorites xd trainers eating other trainers pokemon~ so much good stuff here, very great job<3
Posted by Maja 3 years ago Report
Hey thanks for the compliment and kind words! I definitely enjoy a lot of what's going on here too. Smol cute preds taking on bigger prey is one of my favorites so I'm glad to have an opportunity to write it!
Posted by gigaredpanther 3 years ago Report
It always feels kinda mean when I admit this. But you know what I really like? That feeling of absolute despair in the face of indifference. When a journey of many years becomes meaningless in an instant, helpless to watch as your beloved companions meet their fates as nothing but food. There was no payoff to the adventure. There was no mark on history, not even a footnote. The entire grand purpose that destiny had in store for them was just to keep a trio sated for an afternoon. And then soon enough, they'll be forgotten entirely.
That right there. That's what I adore, even if it's bleak.
Posted by Maja 3 years ago Report
Oh you can be sure that every messy gulp, every slurp, every gurgle from the bellies of these three lovely ladies brings forth a whole slew of memories for poor Ben here. He's on the FINAL GYM. That's a whole region's worth of adventures, of training his pokemon to become some of the best, bonding with each and every one of them. And in the end, not a single moment of it matters to the ones gulping him and his team down. Not even his grief amounts to anything as that too disappears in a moment of digestive bliss. He's just gone. A relatively unremarkable stepping stone on someone else's journey, a replacement for a lost lunch. His devourer never even bothered to ask his name before cutting all of his aspirations short in just one afternoon. But hey, at least he was tasty... whoever he was.
If you can't tell... I love it too XD
Posted by gigaredpanther 3 years ago Report
Cute characters, soul-crushing tragedy, and satisfied bellies. The components for a delightful little vorefic -w-
Posted by Maja 3 years ago Report
Amen haha
Posted by rugli 3 years ago Report
Lovely story, it touch lot of correct dials, as smaller preds on larger prays is always good thing. With that said I would love to see more stories similar to these I have few Idea if you want hear it can I send you pm?
Posted by Dontplanonposting 2 years ago Report
Id love to see another story with shae in it
Posted by Maja 2 years ago Report
Haha just her or the whole team? She was a great time to write and it is a possibility she'll pop up again.
Posted by Dontplanonposting 2 years ago Report
Either. Personally id love to see her pack away even more Pokémon in a potential sequel. But any story with her in it would be a great read
Posted by TheSoftie 1 year ago Report
I'm surprised I've never left a comment here...I think this might be my favorite story on Eka's. The way you capture the horror of the prey's situation sinking in, the predators toying with their meals, and the description of how oppressively tight it is inside each throat and stomach is all just perfect. I'd love to see more with Shae and her team, they're really fun!
Posted by Maja 1 year ago Report
Well this is a sweet surprise! Thank you so much for the praise, I'm so glad to hear it! You've made my day haha. I'd love to see more of these guys too. Sadly certain outstanding issues have kept me from writing for a while but these guys are definitely on my radar. Thanks again, you made me blush