Uploaded: 2 years ago
Views: 17,836
File size: 138.00 KiB
MIME Type: application/msword
Comments: 5
Favorites: 75
Tags: Action Taimanin amputee Amputee Pred ass expansion Asuka Koukawa bathroom Belch Belching Belching Clothes Belly belly expansion Betrayal bidet bones in belly Bones in scat Breast Expansion Breasts Burp Burping burping up hair busty prey Corruption countdown Cruel Pred curvy prey Digestion Disposal dont ask where julius was in 2035 F/F Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Fuck Morrissey grinding on belly groping groping boobs groping prey groping self h-hayai ! ! Human Pred humping belly Kirara Onisaki Koukawa Asuka Lactation Masturbation mechanical arm Mirror Selfie naked apron Oni prey Onisaki Kirara Oral Vore Orgasm peeing Phone piss Pissing Pooping Power theft Prosthetic arm robot arm rubbing belly Same Size Scat schlicking selfie selfies Skull skull in scat Soft Vore speedster squirting stomach tattoo Taimanin (Series) Taimanin Asagi Toilet voretober voretober 2022 wardrobe malfunction Watersports Weight Gain
This story is the disposal version. Please see the next entry if you prefer clean digestion.
Another day, another entry for my Voretober series! The prompt this time was "Frozen" - but we'll get to that later.
After a week, I've finally finished this beast of a story! Asuka Koukawa was one of my brainrot canons for this big event. I got into Action Taimanin a couple months ago, and first had a lil giggle at the narration saying she had "muscles like a predator with no extra fat" (as though she doesn't have a pair of fat fucking milkers). But then the game went almost out of its way to show how much of a capable combatant she is, keeping up with the "Almighty" Asagi herself. Even a goddamn half-oni was intimidated by her. And then, the more I found out about her, the more I fell.
I'll eventually get around to reading the Taimanin VNs. (Except Taimanin Kurenai. That one just refuses to work no matter what the fuck I try.) But for now, I'm just going off the funny gacha that most long-term Taimanin fans seem to dislike. The, uh, third gacha, not the first or second. (Is Taimanin GOGO a gacha too?)
Anyway, the aforementioned half-oni happened to be Kirara, who uses ice powers, and that made this pairing a shoe-in for the "Frozen" prompt. As you can tell by the length, I poured a lot of effort into making this special, and I put a lot of emphasis on the pred-prey interaction after the swallowing happens - something that doesn't normally get a chance to shine in my stories. Asuka's "demon" form (mode?) is kind of insane, kind of cruel, but still Asuka from what I know, so she made the most sense for actually eating Kirara.
On multiple occasions, I almost typed "Kiara" instead of "Kirara". I blame Fate exposure and Kirara being a stupid name. This is part of why she gets eaten, on top of being a cute, busty blonde.
I might make this the start of a castwipe. I brainstormed it a little with a friend, but even for just the playable cast of Action Taimanin, that's gonna be...Very, very long.
Word count: 10,492
Burp count: 11
Thumbnail source. Requires a Pixiv account.
Posted by ItsSongxing 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the comment! Yeah, it did end up a lot of tags, even for one of my works. Some of them are kinda redundant (like masturbation and schlicking, or the multiple "belly" and "disposal"-type tags), but a story this long and this horny is bound to get tagged.
That said, I'm happy that I was able to get my vision out so clearly! A confident yet inexperienced pred - that's what I was going for with Asuka here, and Kirara being one tough cookie to gurgle.~
[ Reply ]
Posted by pbysteria 2 years ago Report
a really nice vore story that takes a lot of care for post-swallowing fun! All the back and forth between leading up to a belchgasm was great, and some lovely gain descriptions afterwards as well
[ Reply ]
Posted by ItsSongxing 2 years ago Report
Thank you~! I'm happy the hard work paid off. This fic has a lot of newer ground for me that I don't typically work with, but I think that suits Asuka's whole "first time pred" status here.
If I do continue this into a castwipe, Asuka's probably going to get more confident with experience...And even more ruthless. Fitting that her voracious snowballing would start by eating a gal that controls ice, huh?
[ Reply ]
Posted by MakCin 2 years ago Report
We need more Taimanin on this site
[ Reply ]